Can I get some feedback? T_T

[R a v e S o n g]

Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.



dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.

[inthesis]

R a v e S o n g

Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.



dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.

I like it. Could use a wee bit of shadowing on the forehead near the hairline though :X

Edit: Just noticed, the right hand could use some work, the fingers are kinda spread out a lot

[R a v e S o n g]

inthesis

R a v e S o n g

Hello there.

This is a roleplay character someone who commissioned me, and I do uber cheap commissions.(Like, $2-4 for something like this.) It's not done, but I'd like a little feedback on it.

I'd really, really like help with coloring, mostly. My line art and anatomy gets better daily... My coloring seems to be taking much longer to progress. Tutorial links would be appreciated, because I haven't found a good one for Sai that suits my level.

Though, anatomy critiquing is also essential. As far as character design, I'd rather not hear about it, not my idea.



dA anyone?

Mine's Astraflux.

I like it. Could use a wee bit of shadowing on the forehead near the hairline though :X

Edit: Just noticed, the right hand could use some work, the fingers are kinda spread out a lot

Ah, I totally missed the forehead shading. o-o I will also admit, I'm still getting better at hands. I find it really hard to make them look natural still. @_@