Hey I just read the first chapter ^___^ I love it already. Yu Yu Hakusho is awesome. I kinda wish you would've mentioned 'why' Yusuke was so concerned during the first chapter that second morning. It sounded kind of random and I doubt it was. Was Kurama's face pale? Was he walking slower than usual? Red eyes? Slacking arms? Or did Yusuke sense something wrong with Kurama's energy? I understand that you were probably trying to hold on to the mystery, but the reader already knows there's gonna be something wrong with Kurama from reading the summary, so you might as well give a few little hints. ^__^ It also teases the reader some more xD
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