Angelic Muse
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- Posted: Tue, 15 Jun 2004 15:50:52 +0000
Poetic Advice Thread
A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
-Paul Valrey, poet
Hello! Muse here!
I have been away for quite a long time. This thread was created roughly 10 years ago, with the intention of helping poets in need of constructive criticism.
Since I have meandered back into Gaia, I thought I might see if this is still useful to anyone roaming these forums.
Please read the following before posting poetry here:
Rules
1. Please respect one another. No flames.
2. Accept constructive criticism politely, even if you don't agree with it.
3. Have fun! Chat a little! 3nodding
Common Poetry Words
A writer that posted on this thread gave me a list of words that should not be used in poetry as much considering they are used way too often. I ask anyone who has any other words that are "cliche" to post it here and I will add it.
NOTE: This does not mean that the words cannot EVER be used. (Thank you to Apropos Krause for the input. 3nodding )
Rashiga
Crimson
Abyss
Razor blades
Cut
love(it is alright, but try to show it instead of plain out saying it)
rage
Pools of blue
Eyes
Hair
Ruby Lips
thin red line
heart
sweet
rose
sillouhetted(sp)
jade
diamonds
smile
Angelic Muse
tender
grace
depression
rejection
dead
night
blood
drugs
decay
cried
suicide
SaihOfThePickleDynasty
pain
____ hates me
KuraiShinseiNaHojyo
nice
Fascist Admiral Ruiner
Cold
Darkness
Shadows (but not shade)
Death/Dead/Die
Rage
Vampire
soul
Angelina Lector
spirit
feel
lie
betray
why
anguish
demon
angel
hell
heaven
pain
fair
unfair
NEW Eares Deathlord
Embrace
Resentment
Depressed
Fear
Tears of blood
Blind
Lonely
Some Obvious Rhyme Pairs
Angelina Lector
heart/apart
love/above
pain/again (<----NOT A RHYME)
care/unfair
you/true
me/see
pain/rain
cry/die
die/lie
blame/shame
~~~
NOTE: Opinions of cliche words and rhymes do not necessarily reflect my views or the views of others that post in this thread.
A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
-Paul Valrey, poet
Hello! Muse here!
I have been away for quite a long time. This thread was created roughly 10 years ago, with the intention of helping poets in need of constructive criticism.
Since I have meandered back into Gaia, I thought I might see if this is still useful to anyone roaming these forums.
Please read the following before posting poetry here:
Rules
1. Please respect one another. No flames.
2. Accept constructive criticism politely, even if you don't agree with it.
3. Have fun! Chat a little! 3nodding
Common Poetry Words
A writer that posted on this thread gave me a list of words that should not be used in poetry as much considering they are used way too often. I ask anyone who has any other words that are "cliche" to post it here and I will add it.
NOTE: This does not mean that the words cannot EVER be used. (Thank you to Apropos Krause for the input. 3nodding )
Rashiga
Crimson
Abyss
Razor blades
Cut
love(it is alright, but try to show it instead of plain out saying it)
rage
Pools of blue
Eyes
Hair
Ruby Lips
thin red line
heart
sweet
rose
sillouhetted(sp)
jade
diamonds
smile
Angelic Muse
tender
grace
depression
rejection
dead
night
blood
drugs
decay
cried
suicide
SaihOfThePickleDynasty
pain
____ hates me
KuraiShinseiNaHojyo
nice
Fascist Admiral Ruiner
Cold
Darkness
Shadows (but not shade)
Death/Dead/Die
Rage
Vampire
soul
Angelina Lector
spirit
feel
lie
betray
why
anguish
demon
angel
hell
heaven
pain
fair
unfair
NEW Eares Deathlord
Embrace
Resentment
Depressed
Fear
Tears of blood
Blind
Lonely
Some Obvious Rhyme Pairs
Angelina Lector
heart/apart
love/above
pain/again (<----NOT A RHYME)
care/unfair
you/true
me/see
pain/rain
cry/die
die/lie
blame/shame
~~~
NOTE: Opinions of cliche words and rhymes do not necessarily reflect my views or the views of others that post in this thread.