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PL's Peak: Guide to Poetry and Critique (feedback/discuss!)

Why are you here?

I'm here for the poetry guide!	45.8%	[ 658 ]
I'm here for the critiquing guide!	18.5%	[ 266 ]
I'm here because someone else pointed me here.	5.9%	[ 85 ]
I'm here for the gold. Didn't it say it had a poll?	29.8%	[ 428 ]
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Zero is an Integer

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Post: 27141949_451 created on Tue, 23 Nov 2010 21:39:18 +0000
Posted: Tue, 23 Nov 2010 21:39:18 +0000

Dakk

Probably Zero

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There's a reasonable need to rebel.

Just need to choose when and where... 3nodding

That would imply some semblance of structure.

CONFORMIST!!! scream scream scream

YOU HAVE EARS!

CONFORMIST!

Now, now. No making fun of me for being God's special little creature.

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Post: 27141949_452 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2010 21:03:21 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2010 21:03:21 +0000

I need to shave.

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Post: 27141949_453 created on Sun, 28 Nov 2010 00:14:59 +0000
Posted: Sun, 28 Nov 2010 00:14:59 +0000

I Smoke Smarties

isnt poetry a way of shwoing emmosions ?? im not sure

y u no meet me in towns D:< im not gonna call juu DA DA anymore untill juu apoligize father >:W

love juu c:

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Post: 27141949_454 created on Mon, 06 Dec 2010 19:21:27 +0000
Posted: Mon, 06 Dec 2010 19:21:27 +0000

Il y a du neige tout part!

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Post: 27141949_455 created on Sun, 26 Dec 2010 06:43:04 +0000
Posted: Sun, 26 Dec 2010 06:43:04 +0000

omgChe

Il y a du neige tout part!

All of the snow skipped over the GTA. emo

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Post: 27141949_456 created on Thu, 30 Dec 2010 21:53:17 +0000
Posted: Thu, 30 Dec 2010 21:53:17 +0000

il faut

omgChe

Il y a du neige tout part!

All of the snow skipped over the GTA. emo

I assume GTA stands for Great Tragedy: Alabama.

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Post: 27141949_457 created on Thu, 30 Dec 2010 22:14:53 +0000
Posted: Thu, 30 Dec 2010 22:14:53 +0000

So what's going to happen when it gets out that there are in reality only about forty people who visit Gaia, but most of them have thousands of mules of various types, just to play the full range of human brilliance to stupidity, as a grand social experiment?

Would that be poetic, thus deserving placement here?

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Post: 27141949_458 created on Thu, 30 Dec 2010 22:43:31 +0000
Posted: Thu, 30 Dec 2010 22:43:31 +0000

Hoodimann

il faut

omgChe

Il y a du neige tout part!

All of the snow skipped over the GTA. emo

I assume GTA stands for Great Tragedy: Alabama.

xd

Lol. It means Greater Toronto Area.

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Post: 27141949_459 created on Fri, 31 Dec 2010 19:57:46 +0000
Posted: Fri, 31 Dec 2010 19:57:46 +0000

i honestly dont know what im doing, how do i submit poetry?? smile

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Post: 27141949_460 created on Mon, 10 Jan 2011 18:30:11 +0000
Posted: Mon, 10 Jan 2011 18:30:11 +0000

First you have to ball-gag it. Then, call it all sorts of mean names. When that fails, start the whippings.

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Post: 27141949_461 created on Sun, 23 Jan 2011 18:23:23 +0000
Posted: Sun, 23 Jan 2011 18:23:23 +0000

Hoodimann

Someone should tell them that it defeats the purpose if they're just going to be worthless assholes anyway.

omgChe

First you have to ball-gag it. Then, call it all sorts of mean names. When that fails, start the whippings.

Don't forget the heavy cream.

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Post: 27141949_462 created on Wed, 09 Feb 2011 10:08:51 +0000
Posted: Wed, 09 Feb 2011 10:08:51 +0000

You Are: E.C.L.!
By: Casey Racer ( me)
you are: the moon
the sun and the stars
the rush of sugar
a really fast car

You are: the wind
beneath my wings
a ray of light
all shiney things

You are: a drop of water
in a hopless drought
a GPS with an
alturnative route

You are: the one that i want
and the one that i need
when i look you in the eyes
i get weak in the knees

You are: the sunshine
on a cloudy day
The gloss on my lips and
all ther funny things i say

with just one grin:
you can melt my fears
lessen my anger
and dry my tears

you are: the reason
for my sudden smile
the paint on my nails
and my pointless denial

you can always :
read my thoughts
make me laugh
and put my heart in knots

you are: the butterflies in my stomache
and my rapid heart beat
the pounding in my ears
and my increasing body heat

you are: the smile upon my face
the emotions i feel
and the one who makes
my heart race

you are: a strong pair of arms
an easy to hold hand
a pair of beautiful eyes
and a grin that is grand

you are: an amazing person
and that will never change
when i look you in the eyes
i cant help but feel this way!

WHAT DO YOU THINK?.... : T

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Post: 27141949_463 created on Sun, 03 Apr 2011 23:53:44 +0000
Posted: Sun, 03 Apr 2011 23:53:44 +0000

bigballer32

i honestly dont know what im doing, how do i submit poetry?? smile

Go into the sub-forum, click new topic, write what you want to write, click submit.

DO NOT do what "RaWrZ loves YOU" did. This is not the thread to be posting your poetry in. It sounds like they're begging for comments, when in reality, it's unlikely that anyone will read it.