F.73| Official Constructive Criticism Thread | MOD APPROVED

[SenseiLawliet21]

Hey everyone! I am a musician in Lexington , Ky! Here is the link to my facebook which has more info and my soundcloud as well. The page is new, but expect big things soon.

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Tokyo-Wellness-Organization/538178739540909?ref=ts&fref=ts

I have my first show on the 27th, more info on that link.

I have posted on here before, but these new songs are mixed MUCHHHH better.

[Alukarj]

Bellicide Du Vante

Bell's Beat Has an Ebm feel to it, right? ;D

The percussion is very repetitive. I'd try to change it up a lot, seeing how everything else just repeats itself. Or maybe change the bassline. After awhile it becomes uninteresting. It would've been funny to have thrown in a Dial-up connection sound somewhere in there seeing as the guy in the beginning asks, "What the ******** is the Internet?" I don't know what EBM really sounds like to tell you that it does.

chefetage

hello

feel free to check out, download and play the music from chef-etage on soundcloud
wide range of styles for anybody

www.soundcloud.com/chef-etage

you wont be sorry about that

regards

chef:etage
# facebook

You track Brain ******** is nice. Though, I think it would be more brain ******** if the kicks were heavier. That's just my suggestion on that one. Hörstimulanz sounds pretty cool. I like the rhythm in that one. Pretty nice.

Prelude in C Minor Remix

[Evolsine]

Alukarj

Prelude in C Minor Remix

It was wonderful until you went all 90's aqua barbie girl on the drums. Sorry dude. I was enjoying it much more without the demi random disco funk.

Classic trance was more acidy, so I have to stick by my guns and say you missed that too. This is 90's cookiecutter right before it became all dark.

[Alukarj]

Evolsine

Alukarj

Prelude in C Minor Remix

It was wonderful until you went all 90's aqua barbie girl on the drums. Sorry dude. I was enjoying it much more without the demi random disco funk.

Classic trance was more acidy, so I have to stick by my guns and say you missed that too. This is 90's cookiecutter right before it became all dark.

So what do you suggest? By the way, this isn't classic trance. sweatdrop

[Sonic1225]

This is something I just finished up and I must say, this went quite rather well in my opinion.

http://soundcloud.com/antwonious/nuclear-warfare-of-cybernetics

Same thing but in souncloud for download

[GlassBox]

Anyone noticed how broken this forum is in chrome?

... anyway. I made stuff, check it out. I'm still in love with it, so I gotta give it a few days before i decide i hate something about it. If anything, I'd say it needs more drum variation and another drop. And there's one resonation automation (heh... rhymes.. ) thats bugging me.

GlassBox - Come On

also, you see that title? most original title you ever done seen

[RadionStorm]

I'm completely new to this stuff but I think i've got some good ideas, looking for sort a trance theme here I'd like you guys to check out the tracks i've made so far in particular 1,5, and 8 as I think they are the best. They all still need work but i'm at a loss as to where to go, the structured are pretty simple too but i'm just starting out so I could use any advice you guys could give me, thanks ^_^

My sound cloud.

[NESDUB]

RadionStorm

I'm completely new to this stuff but I think i've got some good ideas, looking for sort a trance theme here I'd like you guys to check out the tracks i've made so far in particular 1,5, and 8 as I think they are the best. They all still need work but i'm at a loss as to where to go, the structured are pretty simple too but i'm just starting out so I could use any advice you guys could give me, thanks ^_^

My sound cloud.

I like the unique style, and the melodies are catchy. Look up how to EQ and Mix your productions. Mixing a song effects a great deal of how the listener "feels" the song, It will give your music more brilliance and depth. Right now your high,mid, and low frequencies are clashing because they haven't been mixed and or EQ'd. They whole method of mixing and EQing isnt simple and there are tons of methods, But youll get the hang of it the more you learn and youll begin to devolop your own unique method. I'm still learning how to perfect my sound. Also try adding some FXs to your sounds like fades, reverb, sweeps, deleys, ect....It also gives your song more depth and atmosphere.

[RadionStorm]

Faded Subs

RadionStorm

I'm completely new to this stuff but I think i've got some good ideas, looking for sort a trance theme here I'd like you guys to check out the tracks i've made so far in particular 1,5, and 8 as I think they are the best. They all still need work but i'm at a loss as to where to go, the structured are pretty simple too but i'm just starting out so I could use any advice you guys could give me, thanks ^_^

My sound cloud.

I like the unique style, and the melodies are catchy. Look up how to EQ and Mix your productions. Mixing a song effects a great deal of how the listener "feels" the song, It will give your music more brilliance and depth. Right now your high,mid, and low frequencies are clashing because they haven't been mixed and or EQ'd. They whole method of mixing and EQing isnt simple and there are tons of methods, But youll get the hang of it the more you learn and youll begin to devolop your own unique method. I'm still learning how to perfect my sound. Also try adding some FXs to your sounds like fades, reverb, sweeps, deleys, ect....It also gives your song more depth and atmosphere.

Thanks for all the tips! I added a multiband compressor to the master channel and then played with the equalizer a bit on track 8 It does sound cleaner albeit a bit quieter.

[NESDUB]

RadionStorm

Faded Subs

RadionStorm

I'm completely new to this stuff but I think i've got some good ideas, looking for sort a trance theme here I'd like you guys to check out the tracks i've made so far in particular 1,5, and 8 as I think they are the best. They all still need work but i'm at a loss as to where to go, the structured are pretty simple too but i'm just starting out so I could use any advice you guys could give me, thanks ^_^

My sound cloud.

I like the unique style, and the melodies are catchy. Look up how to EQ and Mix your productions. Mixing a song effects a great deal of how the listener "feels" the song, It will give your music more brilliance and depth. Right now your high,mid, and low frequencies are clashing because they haven't been mixed and or EQ'd. They whole method of mixing and EQing isnt simple and there are tons of methods, But youll get the hang of it the more you learn and youll begin to devolop your own unique method. I'm still learning how to perfect my sound. Also try adding some FXs to your sounds like fades, reverb, sweeps, deleys, ect....It also gives your song more depth and atmosphere.

Thanks for all the tips! I added a multiband compressor to the master channel and then played with the equalizer a bit on track 8 It does sound cleaner albeit a bit quieter.

No problem smile Keep at it and you'll get more experience for sure.

[bath gloves]

http://rodrone.bandcamp.com/track/barren

More drone stuff, I'm going aim for a new EP by Christmas... Maybe even a full length!

[Reticence]

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[Evolsine]

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