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Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?


ok ._.
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?


ok ._.


No, seriously, I WANT feedback. If you think its ok, why is it not excellent? Why is not horrible train wrecking?

USE> YOUR > WORDS > PLEASE.
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?


ok ._.


No, seriously, I WANT feedback. If you think its ok, why is it not excellent? Why is not horrible train wrecking?

USE> YOUR > WORDS > PLEASE.


well it doesn't really matter about what I say but I like tones that are happy sounding and melodies. Something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rL1kXvfFhU Not the whole song but the light chorus that is being played.

But thanks for asking.
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
THREAD IS FOR FEEDBACK, NOT FOR: OMFG I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ITS GREAT..

CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.


My latest:

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/transformer-2


Its ok ._.


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?


ok ._.


No, seriously, I WANT feedback. If you think its ok, why is it not excellent? Why is not horrible train wrecking?

USE> YOUR > WORDS > PLEASE.


well it doesn't really matter about what I say but I like tones that are happy sounding and melodies. Something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rL1kXvfFhU Not the whole song but the light chorus that is being played.

But thanks for asking.


You like Major scale melodies I guess? Or just brighter synths as well. That's cool.

However this is not trance, so the same principles don't apply. I guess if the song was supposed to be more euphoric I would use that as a valid critique. Thanks for the input though.
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine
Cocktail_queen
Evolsine


1. You know how old that is?

2. CRITIQUE ONLY PLEASE. ONLY IF YOUR KNOW SOMETHING.
3. Ok, OK how? What is wrong? What is right? How should I improve?


ok ._.


No, seriously, I WANT feedback. If you think its ok, why is it not excellent? Why is not horrible train wrecking?

USE> YOUR > WORDS > PLEASE.


well it doesn't really matter about what I say but I like tones that are happy sounding and melodies. Something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rL1kXvfFhU Not the whole song but the light chorus that is being played.

But thanks for asking.


You like Major scale melodies I guess? Or just brighter synths as well. That's cool.

However this is not trance, so the same principles don't apply. I guess if the song was supposed to be more euphoric I would use that as a valid critique. Thanks for the input though.


Np Im a happy person and I love to feel Euphoria lol soo yeah.

My husband thinks I'm crazy when I try to explain to him that I can feel the music and it feels Euphoric ._.
Amlia. The fact that the waveform is so uniform bothers me for some reason.

@Koukou, I like Blood Shots, but the bassline could be a bit more defined. By which I mean that the notes sort of run together a bit. Everything else is so sharp, short attack, short decay, short release, that the bassline kind of sounds out of place. Maybe shorten the decay on the filter and the release on the volume just a tad?

@Pink-Supervisor-chan, it should be "you know", not "your know". Please fix that before quoting it again.
Layra-chan
Amlia. The fact that the waveform is so uniform bothers me for some reason.

@Koukou, I like Blood Shots, but the bassline could be a bit more defined. By which I mean that the notes sort of run together a bit. Everything else is so sharp, short attack, short decay, short release, that the bassline kind of sounds out of place. Maybe shorten the decay on the filter and the release on the volume just a tad?

@Pink-Supervisor-chan, it should be "you know", not "your know". Please fix that before quoting it again.


Crap, sorry. scream
Layra-chan
@Koukou, I like Blood Shots, but the bassline could be a bit more defined. By which I mean that the notes sort of run together a bit. Everything else is so sharp, short attack, short decay, short release, that the bassline kind of sounds out of place. Maybe shorten the decay on the filter and the release on the volume just a tad?


Yeah, I've been getting words about the bass, like the waveform sounds flatulent. Perhaps I'll gate it and see how that sounds.

What did you think of Symbiosis though?
Layra-chan


Needs more La Vie En Rose


Lingerie?

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Yes. Also the song they used in the film for timing.

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