Zero the hunter item desings STEAMPUNK: FEEDBACK?

Cheongsam item idea good?

yes	50.0%	[ 11 ]
no	22.7%	[ 5 ]
undecided	27.3%	[ 6 ]
Total Votes:			[ 22 ]

[Zero the hunter]

My submissions for CrosStitch's item contests. Always looking for feedback and suggestions.

Current submissions:

Steampunk #1: Mask (needs name)
Inspired by venetian carnival masks.

Steampunk #2: Gear Cheongsam [rough model will post final design later]
Combined two different themes. Chinese dress and steampunk. Still just a draft. Will have gear patterns on the dress and a large gear attached to a rope belt. Also with a corset and frills.

Past submissions:
OC character

OC item #1: Iron Warrior Mask (submitted)

Inspired by one of my characters that is a gladiator warrior that no one has ever seen his face. First attempt not my best.

OC item #2: Faceless Evil Mask (submitted)

One of my characters is a commander of demon troops. He has no physical body so he's only a mask and clothes.

[Embier]

Yup, removing the arm would definitely be a Body Mod owo

[Amemya]

I think that mask looks pretty cool! *v*

[gabilliam tho]

...that's it?

[Zero the hunter]

Item updated and submitted. I am really not good with drawing. Maybe I will submit a second item if I have the time to make it. sweatdrop
Also making metallic colors ain't easy.

[Zero the hunter]

Created a second item for the OC contest. Need feedback on it. Also a good name for the item.

[Zero the hunter]

Updated second item with colors and minor changes. Feedback?

[Zero the hunter]

Looking for feedback for steampunk items.
Steampunk #1: Mask (needs name)
Inspired by venetian carnival masks.

Steampunk #2: Gear Cheongsam
Combined two different themes. Chinese dress and steampunk. Still just a draft. Will have gear patterns on the dress and a large gear attached to a rope belt. Also with a corset and frills.

[Dead_Lover20]

I really like the dress idea. I would love to see it finished as the final design. I think you have a good start on it 4laugh

[BrightestSky]

The first one is definitely the MOST steampunk

[Zero the hunter]

I little feedback would be appreciated instead of just voting. Post what you think of my designs.

[nekodama]

I like the concept of Gear Cheongsam. This the only entry I've seen so far with a chinese dress- steampunk combination, so it's very original. However, I suggest refining the lines so that it looks less sketchy.
Also, did you come up with color variations yet?
I suggest the following color combination:
- red with gold gear pattern
- blue with silver gear pattern
- black with bronze gear pattern
- dark purple with white gear pattern