This is the main focus, she is a half-mutant girl:
The black ring on her face is her birthmark.
This is 2 of the sample pages, I have 11 pages so far (and of course they are not processed yet):
Please comment and I will take and filter out advices since I simply don't have the time to redo the pages, but I will take useful lessons from you guys and apply them to my future art.
Also, I'm not associated with any other users here, so my arts are completely original and copyrighted.
Thanks.