008ken_ichijouji
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- Posted: Sat, 31 Dec 2011 06:39:05 +0000
LostPriestess
If you insist we share our work...
After quite a bit of revising scripts and stressing over character designs, I've decided it's time to just start drawing the damn thing. It might be a little premature to share, but oh well, I need criticism at every step of the project. Here's the rough version of the cover and first page,
I know that I want the entire thing to be in color, but I'm still playing around with styles of doing to. Right now I'm leaning towards getting rid of the inked outlines and going for a fairly realistic 'painted' type of style.
Cover Page
Page One
I hate that forth panel, it's going away in the finished version. I do not yet know what will replace it, but it isn't staying.
On a related note, I'm looking for beta readers for the script. I'm not so much looking for corrections in spelling and grammar, as I'm looking for people to just give me opinions of what they think about the plot, characters, pacing, world building, character development, etc. Any takers?
After quite a bit of revising scripts and stressing over character designs, I've decided it's time to just start drawing the damn thing. It might be a little premature to share, but oh well, I need criticism at every step of the project. Here's the rough version of the cover and first page,
I know that I want the entire thing to be in color, but I'm still playing around with styles of doing to. Right now I'm leaning towards getting rid of the inked outlines and going for a fairly realistic 'painted' type of style.
Cover Page
Page One
I hate that forth panel, it's going away in the finished version. I do not yet know what will replace it, but it isn't staying.
On a related note, I'm looking for beta readers for the script. I'm not so much looking for corrections in spelling and grammar, as I'm looking for people to just give me opinions of what they think about the plot, characters, pacing, world building, character development, etc. Any takers?
Hee hee. But I quite liked that fourth panel......maybe it's the face that's bugging you though. It's perhaps off slightly, I don't know HOW, but..... I liked the pose. XD
Anyway, nice style! What's it going to be about? I'll read it if you have a way of giving me updates. I might forget. D: