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                                  : i think it's reallly cute! But the thing that puts me off a tiny bit is the arms. I think you could use some other type of arm poses since there's many to choose from. I don't have much suggestions but other than the arms you have, i think it's a really good avi! 7/10

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Just looking for some advice on how to improve it or something XD

Tipsy Bunny

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Super super cute!
I give it a 10/10!!!
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Toxic Trickster

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Just looking for some advice on how to improve it or something XD


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ShamelessStar

Looks decent, but try a sky background? would look good with the moon imo!
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Azunaz
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Just looking for some advice on how to improve it or something XD


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Thank you XD I'm not familiar.

I would say yours is a 10. Everything blends and just looks awesome. Great dark assassin look.

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Azunaz
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Just looking for some advice on how to improve it or something XD


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Thank you XD I'm not familiar.


No problem.

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Now i just got skipped though, you should go back to edit the post instead

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I don't think you got a rate with all of the silliness going on, so I'll help out! I like the look you're going for, but I feel like the position of the leg mod against the flatness of the dress looks really weird. I would also consider an arm mod to make it a more complete look since you're not using standard legs. And largely, those are just technical complaints, not so much styling issues.

Style: 8/10
Mod usage: 6/10

Azunaz


Getting you, too, since you were technically above me.

I like the creepy murderer in the rain thing you've got going on. At the very least, I know I'd be quickly shuffling somewhere safe if I saw you out and about!

9/10

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Aww I really love your avi! biggrin Its adorable!!! 10-10

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      4.5/10. I see no consistency within your avatar. Like, at all.
      It seems like you just put a whole bunch of items together without any consideration.

      @rater: more than just numbers please!

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      4.5/10. I see no consistency within your avatar. Like, at all.
      It seems like you just put a whole bunch of items together without any consideration.

      @rater: more than just numbers please!


I love the black and white military theme. I would probably wear that outfit in real life, resembles a dark comic bock.
10/10

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              The legs and the dress do not work together.
              It's almost like a centaur mod, without the centaur.
              The balance is thrust SO far forwards, it's really weird and off center.
              The imp and the raven are weird additions, and feel thrown on
              the hair and the skin work well together, but the lack of mouth feels really unfinished
              Overall, it just feels very thrown together, with not much cohesion.
              Sticking to the demon/devil theme with the hair would be really good;
              black and white with an accent would work amazing,
              so maybe switch out the dress for a top, skirt, bustle etc
              the leg mod will be fine with the right balancing of shapes, the dress at the minute flows forwards,
              which throws everything off from the legs, which lean back at the toe.
              An arm mod would work well, and help balance out more too.
              3//10, it's just really unfinished and directionless, sorry!!

              @Rater; Suggestions please!
              Trying to make it more complex (while staying "simple)


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I love the street punk feel of your avi. Very nice. And honestly the only suggestions I'd have for making it more complex without too much clutter are vague: aka maybe find a semi-background item that layers well with the background you already have and maybe a different belt/hip item that adds something trailing down the leg on the right side to break that up because it's honestly got the least detail. I honestly don't know of any specific items that would work out for that but...
As is I still think this is awesome. I give it a 10/10.

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