Bare Naked Mizzie
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- Posted: Sun, 21 Jan 2007 01:33:15 +0000
Like the title says, concept sketch.
I'd really appreciate draw-overs and heavy crits, mostly on his lower body, annnd.. maybe her dress. Iunno. I might change it later completely to something different.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v42/Servossi/alaenkaelwip.jpg
Update:
I changes a few things, redid her dress a bit, shortened his legs + made his feet smaller, added her other arm (LOL oops) and shortened her arm and gave her a hand. rofl
I'm in the process of completely redrawing his pants and boots, but I want crits on everything else--except her hair. It's going to be white, so I'm not going to really have any lines for it.
Edit: His legs and feet are still big. x.x; I fixed, will update soonish.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v42/Servossi/alaenkaelwip2.jpg
Update:
Shortened her torso, actually added her arm this time (x_X wink Shorten his legs (again) and redid his pants and boots, uhhh.. changed his tunic a bit.. I think that's it for this update
Things I caught as I was posting:
Need to fix his left (viewer's) arm. It's short.
I swear his tunic/armor will make loads more sense when colored.
Edit: BG ideas would be nice as well! It's supposed to be a very somber moment, he's staring down at her in disbelief like he's waiting for her to suddenly wake up. She'll be all bloody and stuff. *nodnod* She was killed by a warlord, she sacrificed herself to save him. I'll have a better write up on the story behind it with the finished version.
I'd really appreciate draw-overs and heavy crits, mostly on his lower body, annnd.. maybe her dress. Iunno. I might change it later completely to something different.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v42/Servossi/alaenkaelwip.jpg
Update:
I changes a few things, redid her dress a bit, shortened his legs + made his feet smaller, added her other arm (LOL oops) and shortened her arm and gave her a hand. rofl
I'm in the process of completely redrawing his pants and boots, but I want crits on everything else--except her hair. It's going to be white, so I'm not going to really have any lines for it.
Edit: His legs and feet are still big. x.x; I fixed, will update soonish.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v42/Servossi/alaenkaelwip2.jpg
Update:
Shortened her torso, actually added her arm this time (x_X wink Shorten his legs (again) and redid his pants and boots, uhhh.. changed his tunic a bit.. I think that's it for this update
Things I caught as I was posting:
Need to fix his left (viewer's) arm. It's short.
I swear his tunic/armor will make loads more sense when colored.
Edit: BG ideas would be nice as well! It's supposed to be a very somber moment, he's staring down at her in disbelief like he's waiting for her to suddenly wake up. She'll be all bloody and stuff. *nodnod* She was killed by a warlord, she sacrificed herself to save him. I'll have a better write up on the story behind it with the finished version.