If you could explain your comment, that's be nice. Thanks. Or don't bother if you don't think its worth it, I mean, hey, my stuff sucks anyway. So what should I care?
Anyway, thanks for commenting. I'll remember to make it more sucky next time so that it might actually turn out... well, good. And if you can show me something of yours that's, you know, much better, I wouldn't be mean or something when commenting on it. No, of course not.
Thank you very much for commenting on my poem, it means a lot to me.
And you're interpretation of the poem is right, but at the end the person finds relief, but doesn't feel worthy of it. Though the person saving them feels they are worthy of it. I dunno, I got emotional XD
battle not with monsters lest you become a monster and if you gaze into the abyss the abyss gazes into you
THE WORLD IS A HAUNTING PLACE. WE LIVE TO GAIN RICHES. WE DIE NOT KNOWING WHAT RICHES WE HAVE GAINED. WE LIVE IN SPITE OF WAR,CONFLICT AND DEATH. WE LIVE AFTER WARS. WE LIVE AFTER INNER CONFLICT. WE LIVE AFTER MOURNING.WE LIVE FOR OURSELVES. DOES THAT MAKE US SELFISH BEINGS?