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Report | 06/28/2013 8:09 pm

Suyuku-SAMA

lol okay thanks and sorry about that, let me know when the PM's are working for you or you could just send me one, it'd actually be a bit easier since we both seem to write long messages whee as to you adding Jack the Ripper to a chapter of your works I'd advise you to not do that unless it ties really well in with the story, if you just have a random (and a historical known person at that) in your work with no explanation whatsoever the readers will get very confused as to why and may not get an answer in return (ran across one on a site and it was confusing) and you play Alice: the Madness Returns? I have that game for PC and a bunch of Sherlock Holmes PC games, one of which involves Jack the Ripper heart I'm a big fan on mystery games and horror games like Fatal Frame and Silent Hill, and Nancy Drew games too those are fun and who cares if it's for kids? ninja it's probably one of the reasons why I add mystery in my stories to not only to get the readers to think, but for me as well. Makes me think that if I ever got into acting I'd probably be the Protagonist or Antagonist in those kind of stories, then it makes me wish my Dad got me in the film business too, ah oh well.
Alright, here's the link to the website/my page, it's pretty easy to join, ether make up a name or through facebook (which is the one I took) I think you'll really like it too! 4laugh heart
http://www.wattpad.com/user/TarynneBourret

Report | 06/28/2013 5:06 pm

Suyuku-SAMA

sorry this might just be a three part comments...

It also has the mystery as to these strange murders nineteen years before as well as the deaths of both of the woman's parents (I say woman because at eighteen you're legally labelled as an adult even though the book will be in the teen/older teen category) and to know more as to what's happening to her and why.

If you want I can send you a link to the story as well as give you the, oh crap I forgot what it was called, caption, you know that part that you read on the back of the book to give the reader an idea of what it's about. sweatdrop
And thank you very much for the praise, I always thought that it was almost a mandatory thing where writers must at least look into the background of the story that they wish to do and such.
At some point I want to do a story involving the case of Jack the Ripper, imagine how much research I'd have to do on that one... eek And I've actually done something like this a number of times, one of which is a novelette story that takes place during WW2, it's a historical romance with tragedy. My grandfather actually fought in the war as a bomber polite it's a story dedicated to him, although he passed away several years ago so he never got to read it. cry
That story is also posted up on the site that I told you about blaugh turns out a lot of people liked it, it came to me as a shock, as well as another one (which is on hold) that involves a taboo subject, no one has damned me to hell yet for it which surprised me, the readers on this site (though sometimes a little bit pushy) can be very mature and nice. 3nodding
You mentioned you're doing a story involving insane asylums during the Victorian era? Is it because of that ghost story you read on DA? xd No, I'm kidding, but you are right during those times it was very much a mixed bunch comparing the file documents of doctors and nurses then reading the written words of the ones that had once been in the asylum, it can be hard to tell if it's the truth or not.
But I tend to have a saying for things like that: "Facts are always hidden within the lies." the truth is in there somewhere you just need to cross reference your work to find if anything matches up or not. I'm like this with a good friend of mine, when I look into something she ends up helping, she's the one with the math while I'm the one with the out of the box ideas and reading between the lines. With both joked that we might have been detectives in another time! blaugh

As for the whole job thing, ugh, not going so good, still looking, I'm trying to get into retail/customer service, I'm good with people and cloths, and books, and when I put my mind to it I can become rather organized and put together in a professional appearance (Blame my mom, she got me to act like that on instinct) I even just finished college but the job market right now is not good, people say it gets better in the fall, I really, really hope that's not true. sweatdrop But there's nothing much I can do about it right now...

Report | 06/28/2013 5:05 pm

Suyuku-SAMA

I tried to send this through PM’s but apparently you have that disabled so commenting on your profile is the only thing I can do so be prepared, it’s a long one. :sweat:

Anyway you asked about what the story is about so here's by best as describing it:

The story is about a young woman, whose eighteenth birthday is coming closer, but strange things start to happen to her and to her mentality, getting strange visions, odd dreams and even for brief moment her body shows physical changes. What's more is that it seems to connect to the death of her parents (her father was murdered and her mother committed suicide shortly thereafter) when she was eleven. Along with an incident that happened nineteen years prior which seem to be appearing again. What's more the young woman wants to find out what's going on, for herself and her mind's sake.

the story is about a "what if" kind of vibe, by that I mean is if you were to suddenly notice your body's changing then you'd want to know why, and if it's strange you'd probably keep it to yourself in fear of being labeled insane or crazy. If it were happening to me I'd keep my mouth shut, I think that many people would act or even think like this. It's not only realistic but very plausible too, the odd changes the worry that people would think you're acting strange if you speak of it and so on.

It also has the mystery as to these strange murders nineteen years before as well as the deaths of both of the woman's parents (I say woman because at eighteen you're legally labelled as an adult even though the book will be in the teen/older teen category) and to know more as to what's happening to her and why.

If you want I can send you a link to the story as well as give you the, oh crap I forgot what it was called, caption, you know that part that you read on the back of the book to give the reader an idea of what it's about. :sweat:

And thank you very much for the praise, I always thought that it was almost a mandatory thing where writers must at least look into the background of the story that they wish to do and such.

At some point I want to do a story involving the case of Jack the Ripper, imagine how much research I'd have to do on that one... :shock: And I've actually done something like this a number of times, one of which is a novelette story that takes place during WW2, it's a historical romance with tragedy. My grandfather actually fought in the war as a bomber polite it's a story dedicated to him, although he passed away several years ago so he never got to read it. :cry:

That story is also posted up on the site that I told you about :big: turns out a lot of people liked it, it came to me as a shock, as well as another one (which is on hold) that involves a taboo subject, no one has damned me to hell yet for it which surprised me, the readers on this site (though sometimes a little bit pushy) can be very mature and nice. :3nod:

You mentioned you're doing a story involving insane asylums during the Victorian era? Is it because of that ghost story you read on DA? :XD No, I'm kidding, but you are right during those times it was very much a mixed bunch comparing the file documents of doctors and nurses then reading the written words of the ones that had once been in the asylum, it can be hard to tell if it's the truth or not.

But I tend to have a saying for things like that: "Facts are always hidden within the lies." the truth is in there somewhere you just need to cross reference your work to find if anything matches up or not. I'm like this with a good friend of mine, when I look into something she ends up helping, she's the one with the math while I'm the one with the out of the box ideas and reading between the lines. With both joked that we might have been detectives in another time! :big:

As for the whole job thing, ugh, not going so good, still looking, I'm trying to get into retail/customer service, I'm good with people and cloths, and books, and when I put my mi

Report | 06/25/2013 11:39 pm

l 9 9 l

Haha thank you!

Report | 06/25/2013 12:28 am

l 9 9 l

Aww thank you! heart

Report | 06/18/2013 7:53 pm

la petite mignonne

Yeahhhhhh :c that happens sometimes.

Report | 06/18/2013 12:40 pm

la petite mignonne

Oh haha i actually already had most of the items that I'm using for it but thank you haha ^^

Report | 06/18/2013 11:47 am

la petite mignonne

Aww thanks! I just made it because i wanted something to go with this scarf thing from wayfaring vagabond

Report | 06/18/2013 10:23 am

la petite mignonne

Omigosh I saw you comment on someone else's profile and saw your avatar....it's so beautiful!! <3

Report | 06/17/2013 8:38 pm

Fleur-de-Floraison

thank you!!! I really love your avatar!!! oh gawd i couldn't have made it better myself except mine would have to have some black in the hair to represent me though but other than that.. emotion_drool good job on making your avi!

Report | 06/17/2013 6:40 pm

Deraboo

thank you heart

Report | 06/16/2013 10:34 am

Suyuku-SAMA

I'm doing alright, currently working on a fantasy horror involving mermaids. I had to do a tone of research on the subject, you'd be surprised how little there is in English sweatdrop but other then that I'm job hunting which is really hard... xp and I can understand with the whole college aspect but school is pretty important. I went through something like that during two years so I understand pretty well, oh also I wanted to let you know there's this site for writers were you can post your works and they're protected too it's called wattpad.com if you'd like I can send you a link 4laugh

Report | 06/12/2013 8:42 pm

Suyuku-SAMA

Hi!
I saw that you moved your profile (or at least that's what I read hopefully it was correct and I'm not mistaken) sorry it's been so long since I've messaged you, how are you and how goes your writing good I hope 4laugh

Report | 06/12/2013 8:37 pm

Suyuku-SAMA

Hello!
it's been a while since I've sent anything how have you been? as well as your writing you doing well? 4laugh