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Jol_and_Doland r Report | 07/01/2021 9:17 pm

i'm about to write on the fifth chapter. but seeing as i'm basing it on Super Mario Sunshine, i'm having a bit of writer's block. (pretty much, like the game, if it were condensed into a movie.) my characters go on vacation with two other characters, Grace Alomar and her father, Tomedu Alomar. there's a clone of Jol that's already on the island that they're going to, and he's wreaking havoc, leaving calling cards that will implicate the real Jol as being the perpetrator of the crimes. meaning that Jol and Doland's vacation will be spent trying to clean up the mess that this clone created in Jol's name.

Jol_and_Doland r Report | 07/01/2021 8:29 pm

pretty much, the monsters have all been henchmen for human or alien characters. but we've battled beings known as the H'kau, the Cr'tiid, and the X'ecci. first chapter was battle against a despotic scientist with killer robots (her name was Ava Heratik; sort of a Dr. Eggman themed villain.) she was trying to harness the power of an evil genie in order to advance her machines. the next was a disgruntled General, July Jones (and she was the one with the army of H'kau. these bear-like entities with a cow skull for a head and the lower half of a sheep). the X'ecci and Cr'tiid were alien races, two separate races, hired by the cousin of Ava Heratik, Ariel Heratik, in order to take over some castle, and the surrounding kingdom, in another galaxy.

Jol_and_Doland r Report | 07/01/2021 8:14 pm

Jol and Doland adventures. (a book based on my avi.) Doland and I are monster hunters (and also mercenaries).

Jol_and_Doland r Report | 07/01/2021 7:50 pm

just trying to think of what to write for my next chapter. also, as a snack, ya can't go wrong with some chips and salsa. sweatdrop

Jol_and_Doland r Report | 07/01/2021 7:43 pm

Esther. what's good with you, ma? (i know we don't know each other, but i figured i'd say what's up.) cool

ComplexWombat Report | 06/28/2021 1:08 pm

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ComplexWombat Report | 06/28/2021 1:04 pm

Now lemme give you a kiss, auntie.

ComplexWombat Report | 06/26/2021 2:18 pm

Well Im glad you did survive.

ComplexWombat Report | 06/26/2021 2:13 pm

Oh oof, moving house is always a pain in the arse.
But congrats! You survived moving house!

ComplexWombat Report | 06/26/2021 2:10 pm

So you are alive!