thank you! i actually got that title from boys like girls, my favorite band. they have a song called "you, me, and my medication" and the poem reminded me of that title. :3
THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS! I really appreciate them, and if you don't mind, I'm gonna make a few quick responses here;
Winter Mistress: yeah, it was a teensy bit rushed. I kinda sat down one day and wrote it, and that was pretty much it xD
How Dare You: you know, now that you mention it, it really could use some more imagery. My only shtick is, I think it's kinda long enough as it is, and I don't want it going on forever. Then again, what do I know? And also, I kinda stopped where I stopped because I thought the language and overall emotion of the poem really hit hard enough that it didn't need more imagery, but hey, theres always room for improvement ^_^
After: *is honored by le rare 5* ^-^ <3 *hugglesnuggle* thank you sooooooo much! You don't know how much this particular comment means to me!!!! Oh, and do you really think it's not emo? Hm, I guess I misjudged myself. I mean, I feel it's kinda bordering on the emoness, but it really isn't full blown emo. It's about as emo as I get. Trust me, I'm a very happy person xD
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Haha! whats wrong with the bold?
and ya, the Usain Bolt line was my fav too xD
Do you write any one here?
Winter Mistress: yeah, it was a teensy bit rushed. I kinda sat down one day and wrote it, and that was pretty much it xD
How Dare You: you know, now that you mention it, it really could use some more imagery. My only shtick is, I think it's kinda long enough as it is, and I don't want it going on forever. Then again, what do I know? And also, I kinda stopped where I stopped because I thought the language and overall emotion of the poem really hit hard enough that it didn't need more imagery, but hey, theres always room for improvement ^_^
After: *is honored by le rare 5* ^-^ <3 *hugglesnuggle* thank you sooooooo much! You don't know how much this particular comment means to me!!!! Oh, and do you really think it's not emo? Hm, I guess I misjudged myself. I mean, I feel it's kinda bordering on the emoness, but it really isn't full blown emo. It's about as emo as I get. Trust me, I'm a very happy person xD
*twirl twirl twirl*