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News reporter: This is Alen droff reporting on the since.

Many buildings are set a blaze ,roasting away, half of New Life is glowing from the flames.

Alen droff: This fire is believed to have been started by one man. It is said his hand started it just by touching a building. Oh no here he-

Alen runs off leaving his live feed of the blaze. The unknown man picks up the camera looking into it he begins to talk.

Rage: I told you people to stay away from my forests and you did not take my warning. You mocked my warning by building these nonliving heaps of trash. I must remove every pic of trash from my world.

Rage drops the camera, the feed still live, people in the United Plains get a good look at there foe.

Rage wears a black jack,with no zipper or buttons, that comes down to his knees. He wears crimson pants that hang over his rose red and sky white shoes. His eyes are an emerald green which he hides behind Black rectangle shaped shades. His hair is brown and slightly spiked up.

Nina Peel: Ladies and Gentleman of the united plains, This man is very dangerous. If you see him you are advised to run away. We do not know what his true ambitions are as of now but stay tuned to channel 348 news for more information.

By now the whole state of New Life is set a blaze. The small state, off the coast of the Atlantic ocean, is visible from outer space.

Rage: To think the United States would change so much in five hundred years, It even has a new name United Plains. I like the new name but this metal land must go.

The United Plains is the advanced version of the united states. There is no illness in the great plains thanks to medical improvements over the span of five hundred years. No one stays dead for long anymore, once a living person dies there brain is put into a robot that acts as a body that lives forever. The UP is covered in metal with pipes and rails running over every tree, dirt pile, and lining the bottom of rivers. every thing ,in perspective, is perfect in UP.

Rage walks south heading for the center of the next state, New Energy, when he runs into another living breathing jinchuriki.

Envy: Hey Shades I have missed you

Envy wraps her arms around Rages neck and steps up to kiss him on the lips, Rage kissing her back then wrapping his arms around her waist spinning her around then stopping.

Rage: I though I would never see you again, I am glad I was wrong.

Envy: I am too, I have been looking for you for a long while now, I Though you were fury when I heard about the State of new life going up in flames but I noticed they weren't blue or black so I knew it was you.

Rage: Your one smart girl.

Envy: You know it, now that I think about it I might just have to change my name to something Else now that we found each other again.

Rage: For now lets head to the next state to celebrate ower finding each other.

A Jinchuriki is a host of a Biju- a talied beast or talied demon. ,there are nine talied beasts. A jinchuriki shows powers of the biju inside of them. A Biju can only be sealed inside a baby still in the mother's womb. The person that seals the biju into the unborn baby uses all there life energy to seal the biju into the baby. Rage has the eight tallied biju inside of him ,which is the second strongest biju, Rages biju is the Hachimata or eight tailed Dragon.

To Be continued...

Envy is wearing a long light green dress, that comes down to her ankles, the top front of the dress is white with a flower pattern. she has long brown straight hair, that gos down to her elbow. She wears a small red chocker around her neck. her eyes are a beautiful light blue.

Envy: Do you think people here well notice you?

Rage: No they won't people here are to rich to care what happens outside there town.

Envy: wow people have grown very snobbish.

Rage:Thats why this place must be taken out.

Envy and Rage head into New Energy with no problem. they decide to get something to eat at a restaurant overlooking the ocean

Envy: There shrimp is pretty good.

Rage: Yeah It has good spices.

Envy: why did we eat here?

Rage: because of the view

Envy: But why not that one on the beach.

Rage: Because it was too close.

Envy: To close to the ocean.

Rage: No too close to Wrath.

Envy: Wrath?!

As soon as she finishes the name ,Wrath, a huge tidal wave comes form the ocean. The wave Takes most of the building with it as it rushes inland. The water stops coming in just an inch away from Rages foot. A figure slowly raises up from the water.

Wrath is wearing dark blue pants and boots, his shirt is the same dark blue color but the sleeves are cut out and the neck of the shirt gos up over his noes. His fore arms have plats of armor along with part of the dark blue shirt. Wrath is also wearing tan body armor covering his chest, down to his waist, and his back. he also has a scar across his left eye. Wraths Biju is Isonade a three-tailed shark

Wrath: What are you two doing here?

Rage: Just getting ready to take out the town.

Envy: You took out half of it wow thats pretty good.

Wrath: but I still missed the main power station

Rage: I would not worry about it too much Wrath.

Envy: We will take it out together.

Wrath: Well lets go!

Rage sits there as Envy gets up.

Rage: We will not be taking this town down.

Huge roots shoot up from the ground, and out of the buildings.

Wrath:What the?

Envy: You knew this was going to happen didn't you.

Rage: Well yeah I kinda did.

The other half of the town is covered in vines, roots, and plants shooting out of every building. It then begins to glow a slight sliver then a Bright blinding sliver then....there is nothing but dirt and hill.

Rage: Let us welcome the Sorrow.

The sorrow bursts up from the ground glowing a light sliver.

The sorrow has long straight sliver hair going past his fingers. He wears very Dark red pants and boots. He wears steel shoulder pads and a dark red shirt that is open in the front, two sliver straps keep the open part of the shirt kind of closed, on his fore head there is a blue Crescent Moon on his head. his biju is a Hoko a five-tailed dog

Sorrow: I took care of the power wrath.

Rage: Now lets move onto the next State it well take at least four of us.

Envy: Ok lets move out.

Rage sweeps Envy off her feet and he begens to carrie her.
Envy, Rage, Wrath, and the Sorrow head for the state called , Birth Way


As the group enters Birth Way they notice that, most of the buildings are already burnt down to the ground. Rage puts Envy down on her feet. then he squats down looking at a burnt building.

Rage: Someone got here before us.

Wrath: But who?

Sorrow: Looks like the work of the Fury.

Rage: Yeah but there would have been more burnt buildings if the fury did this.

Envy: Yeah you have a point he weakest attack takes 4 buildings twice the size of these.

Wrath: Then it must have been an accident caused my a United Plains citizen.

Sorrow: If Wraths statement were true then these buildings would not be here. They would have removed any trace of imperfections.

Rage: Thats why I hate this new land. It makes every one of it's citizens into perfect humans right after birth. Then when there old enough to walk they push there young bodies to the limit each day by training. Each day many kids die of the training. We are completely destroying this city leave no one alive.

Standing up Rage has an sinister look in his eyes.

Sorrow: we will have to split up to too that Rage.

Rage: I know.

The state of Birth Way is separated up into seven sections. Water way, East Way, South Way, West Way, North Way, Vally Way, and Way Central

Sorrow: we are in North way right now.

Envy: Leave this place to me.

Wrath: I'll take Water way.

Rage: I'll take North Way and Way Central.

A small sound is made. Every one directs there attion toward the sound.

Small Child: H......H..H..Help me please.

Envy rushes over to the child and places her hand on the boys chest, sending a little bit of chraka into the boy keeping him alive.

Small child: Thank you.

Envy: Who did this?

small child: It....it looked like a....a cat but it's face look like a Weasel.

Sorrow and Rage at the same time: Rokubi Raiju Weasel.

Rage: Envy let the boy go.

Envy: But he.

Rage: If you don't they well kill him.

Envy lifts her hand of the small boy's chest

Sorrow: I sagest we go to ower targeted areas the military well be arriving soon in each area we need to get a jump on them.


Envy staying where she is and Rage, Sorrow, and Wrath head out to there ways. envy throws off her dress to revel she is wearing another outfit.

Envy is now wearing blue jeans with a black belt. A lavender pinkish shirt with a black under shirt. Around her neck there is a platinum cross necklace. she also has a big blue hat and two black leather braces around her wrists

Envy: I guess it's time to fight.

We see Wrath fighting with the incoming foes, He shoots stream after stream at his enemy denting there tanks. Wrath then throws a giant wave of water crushing his opponents, Water and east ways buildings and streets. We then see Sorrow melting his opponents down with mako completely destroying them, he then charges mako under west and valley ways. he releases that mako destroying both ways with ease.

We see bluer's moving around in North way to fast for a human eye to fallow. we then see Rage walking into Way central leaving North way standing.....for a few seconds. north way explodes in a Bright red and orange flame. as the dust settles there is nothing Left but small melting pieces of metal

We then see Envy punching the ground causing the way to split in two. most of her enemies fall through the opening in the ground but a few foot soldiers, she quickly grabs a slab of rock and hurling it,like a boomerang, it hits all the soldiers and sending them fling away.

The whole group together: guess My work is done...now off to central.

As the group enters Way central they see two people they have not seen in a while Fury, fighting off enemy after enemy, and Hatred in a tube of sorts in the middle of town

Fury: Nice to see you all again now get over here ans help my get Hatred out of this thing.

Furry is wearing fire. He wears an open fire vest with fire pants along with fire shoes and burning bandages wrapped around his fists.His eyes are a light blue and black. Fury cloths are sapossed to be burning,which they are, because of his biju the seven tailed Suzaku or pheonix. Hatred is wearing a Black t-shirt. and black slightly baggy pants,both his shirt has one and his pants have 2 have lighting bolts on them. he has Bright blonde hair, and a back-wards black cap. With yellow eyes. His biju is the Rokubi Raiju Weasel or six tailed thunder Weasel

Sorrow, Envy, Wrath, and Rage run into the battle to help out

The Beginning of the End.

The Sky darkens to the deepest shade of black and the fighting stops....The wind howls. Rage Knows this.....and it's not good. All he can do is watch.....and try. A Shuriken of the brightest light cuts Furry and the sleeping Hatred in two along with the enemies Furry was fighting. That weapon and that aura....it could not be confused with anyone else.
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Brigadier Ravens: Rage, Envy how nice to see you two again.

Rage: Classic as always. You-

Envy: Hes not worth cussing out. We can't avenge them now..it's to late.

Brigadier Ravens: I have to end this war now. You childeren have been on your rampage for far to long. I have taken down the other five. Now it just leaves you four. Sorrow, Wrath, and of course MY prized two experiments Envy, and Rage the Lovers.

Wrath: We woun't die as easly as you predect.

Sorrow: We will take you down.

Envy realizes something. Ravens could have striken them down by them selfs. It would have been much easier.

Envy: Why did you wait Ravens? You could have slew us down one by one but you wated till the rest of use gathered here. Why?

Rage: You slew the other three in a group. Just like you did Furry and Hatred. Thats the only way you can kill us. In groups, other wise we would just draw of our closest ally. You created us like that so we could never be stopped.

Brigadier Ravens: Aw, see you show my work. I made you two the smartest out of the rest of them. It is true I can't slay you one by one but in groups. I really am sorry that I have to do this, but when you killed the General I have to do it.

Wrath launches a blast of water at the talking Ravens. Ravens leands into the blast. Sorrow tired of Ravens cockkyness sends several throned threes to attack him. The trees wrap themself around Ravens sqeezing and digging there thorns into Ravens armor. The trees snap in half.

Wrath: No way?!?!?!

Sorrow: What the? Theres barely a scratch on you.

Brigadier Ravens: You woun't injury like you did long ago. I took measures to ensure that I would not get hurt.

Rage: Move it or lose it men.

Rage knew what was going to happen all to well. Again the Shuriken strikes Sorrow and strikes Sorrow and Wrath down spliting them both into four parts.

Brigadier Ravens: Rage, Envy...... It pain me to do this but it has to be done. With the country with out a General to lead it...I'm next in line and fixing the counties problem single haded well get me there for that I'm sorry.

unknown to Ravens, Rage or Envy. A man hides behind a burnt buliding.The man Wearing a hooded white robe.The man wispers to him self where no one eles can hear him.

Hooded Man:He knows not what he is doing....If he goes through with it....He is dooming him self to death..Ravens I can't help you, but how I wish I could. Old friend I can't stop you now. I hope you know what you are doing. The ones your trying to protect well begen. Oh how I wish I could tell you your Fist of the Chakra will die with you.......That war long ago took your greatestally and enemy away from you.

Envy and Rage knowing all to well that they woun't escape. They embrace each other for the last time.

Envy: I love you and I'm sorry for not being able to bear you a child. I know it's what you wanted most.

Rage: I loved you before now and i will after now, and not being able to have a child doesn't bother me. I like you for what you can do and love your imperfections.

They both shed a tears of happiness, as they share they final kiss. Brigadier Ravens Turns his Fist of the Chakra into a solid Fine Silver Long sword.

Brigadier Ravens: In another time and place I could have let you live and fix Envy's inability to carry childeren. But thats not hear and now.

Hooded man: For a better tomorrow, no a better mother earth......karoot dagona moskot damar shea narca MOTHER ACCEPT.

Rage and Envy hear the mans voice and know there trip to the after life will an enjoyable one. At the excet moment the man finishes his chant the sword is run through both Envy's and Rage's heart

Brigadier Ravens: It is finally over the threat of the nine tailed beasts.

Man: You have no idea how wrong you are.

Brigadier Ravens: What the Hell is going on?

Ravens notices that his created sword is stuck in Envy and Rage. He pulls and pulls again. It doesn't even budge. He sees the remains of Sorrow, Wrath, Furry, Hatred, Greed, and Sloth hover in the air above Rage and Envy glowing a slight goldish silver.

Brigadier Ravens: No, Whats going on.

Nine Tailed Beasts all at once: Were bound to this world till our creator is with us......we want your engery GIVE IT TO US!!!!

Brigadier Ravens: NOOOOOO!!!!!!

The darkend sky returns back to normal. Ravens lets go of the sword, and doing so he lost his power to use Fist of the Chakra. A Bright white light erupts from the place Rage and Envy shared ther last kiss. Suddenly the white light is sucked back in and the buldings around along with everything eles begens to get sucked in. Ravens with his last bit of might unfolds his wings and begins to flap. He barely manges to get away, but not before the mad man inside of him that created the nine tailed beasts was pulled in. The Man in the white hooded robe jumps out and is pulled into the light. Right before he is sucked in he grabs the sword and it pulls free. The man did not come out of this unscathed. His age has been sucked from him. The only things that remain from the battle are three things. An Older Man. A sword and a sleeping baby boy. The old man carries the infant in his right hand while he holds the sword with his left hand, allowing it to rest on his shoulder.

Older man: Hmph, mother earth was kind to Envy and Rage. This Baby....is prof of that. To bad He will never get to know his wounderful parents. Your name can't be normal, if it could I would take you as one of my other childeren. But I'm happy that you don't get a normal name. Pride, That deadly sin shall be your name. I know you'll wear it proudly.

Suddenly a pyramid rises from the ground. The old man walks in and sees a golden stone table of sorts. He pushes off the top and lays the baby inside the huge table, on to a solid black sheet. He rips off some of his robe and wraps the sword in it. He then lays it next to the baby and lifts the top of the table back on to it's base. He walks out.Temple of Rage and Envy. It is made of pure gold, with rubies and emeralds crested in it. While Blue and Red roses and Green grass surround it.

Older man: Rest little Pride and grow up to become what you are ment to be. I'm sure, I woun't be seeing you again. For as time goes on the harder it will be to find the temple, and to get through it.

The Old man watches as a member of Ravens army gets up and slowly hopes away from Ravens home. He decides there have been enough death for today and lets the injured man go .At that same time Ravens manged to make it to his home...where a surprise awaits him. Reavens hair has grown long and grey and for the frist time in his life ageing There waits his wife and his own witch. The witch begens to work on his apperence. Makeing him look as he did before the battle.

THE END





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