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Scary Story for English Assignment
Trick O' Treating at Wondering Way
By Toan



Dear Readers,
My name is Toan. And I don't know how I'm telling you this story since im supposed to be dead but, this is a story about another Toan okay? I want to be the narrator, and this story will be written in 3rd person. No, this is not true. I do not live on Wondering Way, and I am not dead. This is just a story for an English assignment. So please, sit back. And enjoy.


It was Wednesday, October 31st, 2007. The day of Halloween, or should I say, Trick or Treating. A young teenage boy by the name of Toan was walking home from school. As he was walking home, his homie Steven Nguyen called him.
"Yo' Toan, want to go Trick o' Treatin' tonight?" Steven asked. "Umm, arn't we a bit too old for Trick O' Treatin?" Toan replied. "Heck naw man. You can never be too old for anything. On the outside, I may appear to be a teenager, but on the inside I am a child. You know what they say, It's the inside that counts,"
"Err okay. I have no idea what you just said but, I'll go because my huge stash of chocolate that I've been hoarding for this past 3 months has recently dissapeared.So yeah, If I ever find that dude, Im going to beat him till he's 3/4's dead," Toan replied.
"Okay dude, so come by my house at 4 okay? We need to beat the last checkpoint we saved on Halo 3 on the last level. I really want to beat that game," Steven said.

So as soon as Toan got home, he talked to his mom. His mom said "OK" and Toan gathered his thing's. He brought a empty brown lunchbag, a beanie, stylish clothing, black shades, and a cane.
Toan journeyed to Steven's house on his tricycle. It was on Wonder Way street. It took him only a few minute's to get there.
When Toan got to Wonder Way Street, he looked around for Steven's address, 1408. As soon as Toan found it, he rode up the driveway and set his tricycle down next to the door. Toan knocked on the door and Steven answered.
"Watup bro!" Steven said.
"Wat it doo homie, lets get to that game,"
So as soon as Toan got in, Steven turned on the X-Box 360 and they played Halo 3 till 7:00.
"Yo it's 7:00 homie, we gotta get ready," Steven said.
"Okay let me put on my outfit," Toan replied.
Toan put on his beanie, his black shades, and his stylish clothing. Then he picked up his cane.
"What are you supposed to be? A blind c***k?" Steven asked.
"No homie, I'm dressin up as a pimp dawg," Toan answered
"How are you going to see in the dark with black shades?" Steven asked
"My instinct's will guide me," Toan answered
"Okay homie, let's go then," Steven said

So Toan and Steven left the house. On the street they saw a bunch of other little kid's Trick or Treatin too. Toan and Steven started with the house closest to Steven's, then all the way around the neighborhood. Toan and Steven got alot of candy, but it wasn't enough, so they put up their candy in the house and went on a second load. They noticed that they skipped a house, so they went to it first. It was odd though, nobody was going to that house, and it looked very suspicious. Anyway's, the two guy's were idiot's so they rung the doorbell.
As soon as they rung it, the door opened by itself. Then the two went in the house to look around. It was dark, but like I said, the two were idiot's and didnt seem to care. Both of them split up and got lost. Toan looked around for Steven but couldnt find him. Now, Toan started to get a bit scared. He started screaming "STEVEN, WHERE THE HECK ARE YOU HOMIE!?" but nobody answered. Toan hasn't checked the stair's yet, so he went up and looked around the hallway. All of a sudden, his ear's heard a grinding noise. A chill went down Toan's spine. He followed the noise and ended up at this door. The door was creaked open, so Toan peeked inside. There he saw something that was so scary, he couldnt even scream. He saw a tall dark man carrying a chainsaw grinding up a body. Of course, Toan asssumed it was his friend Steven. Toan didn't want to watch anymore, so he tried to walk away slowly but then all of a sudden, he sneezed as he was walking down the stair's. After that moment, Toan rushed down the stairs and to the door. He tried opening it but it was locked. He could hear footsteps coming, getting louder and louder. Toan couldnt think of anything. So Toan thought of only one thing. He took off his shades and threw them onto the ground and went up the stair's with all his might and charged at the tall dark man with his cane. Obviously, this wasn't really smart. The tall dark man cut off Toan's legs, so Toan couldnt run nor move at all. Then he brought him upstairs into the room Steven was in. Toan saw Steven's body, and started to think about all those time's they spent playing Halo 3. Then Toan began to cry. The tall dark man clipped Toan's back with hooks and hanged him onto the ceiling. He then tortured Toan by cutting him all up and shoving lemons in his mouth, then he poured gasoline all over Toan's body. "DONT TOURCH ME BRO!" Toan screamed like a girl. But the tall dark man ignored him. He lit Toan with a lighter and his body bursted into flames. As soon as Toan started to close his eye's, the man murmured "Trick or Treat huh? I'd rather trick then treat you to my body after I devour you". After that day, Toan and Steven was never found.
Three year's later. The police investigated the house. It was rumored that alot of kid's were dissapearing there, so a team of 8 cop's rushed into the house. They found nobody there. The only thing that they found, were a pair of dusty dark shade's

The end





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R.I.P. Dad...
Yes. Today, February 15th, 7:04 P.M., my dad left.

How? After he had his liver replaced in China, a few months later. Another tumor formed. The doctors couldnt cure this one because it got too big. Now its too late. My dad only had a few months left.

The way he died looked..painful...
I could never feel the pain that he felt.

My aunt and uncles came over to visit and told me to spend more time with my dad.
I said I would but I never did much. I thought "everythings's going to be okay. He cant die."
I was a fool.
If only I spent more time with him.
Now its too late.
Ill never see him again.
All I can do for him now is hope that he reaches heaven safely.

I can still remember the days that he takes me to blockbuster to rent a movie. I can also remember the days when me, dad, mom, and bro went to early whine park and played tennis. I also remember when my dad got up every morning to ride his bike around the block. My dad was really energetic back then. He would make me and my friends that spend the night wakeup in the morning doing morning excercizes. I can also remember the day when he took me to school.

That is all the good memories I have left of him.

R.I.P., Binh Nguyen, AkA Dad.




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