SO I did this fanfic about my occ yeah it's not for you to read if you don't want to and yeah I know I need a spell check..
On a dark night uppon the sand village a young girl in her erly years, by looking at her you could tell she was somewere between going trew her puberty and tiny bit after it she gazed up at the window wandering lost looking at the fairly large desert moon her head turned around after a knock at the door closed behind her she said "Come in" she then looked suprised to see her brother joining her in the room as he said with a rather satisfied tone"So how is being a gennin because I know what being a Joinin is" he smiled and looked at her amazed face at once she then finally moved he lips to say"The exam is tomorrow so I don't know yet, but congradulations for you're success if I am lucky maybe I will become a great ninja like you" her black silky hair was flowing on her hair as the small desert breeze passed on her face her brother smiled and said "can you show me the jutsu, to make sure you are ready for the exam tomorrow" Naru was happier than ever to see her brother she then said "anything you ask is something I will try my best to do"She then put her hands in postion she counted to 3 with her eyes shut closed and then opened them and saw 2 clones beside her smilind her brother did the same and said "Well see you tomorrow after school my little gennin" she then gained confidence by the last words of her older brother she then watcher him go away shutting the woden door from the sand made building. The next morning she woke up petter her dog Kima from time to time while eating break fast. She had some bread and some rice she gave some extra healty dog food for her pet Kima. She went to get her lunch witch was well packed from her mom she felt rather confident that day dough she woulden't have been able to say for sure she passed. She sat down looking rather nervous once she reached the academy. When a chunnin finally called out her name and asked her to use the clone jutsu she finally forced herself really hard making different symbols with her hands when she finally had her eyes shut completly very tight she heard the mans voice say "Congrats you may step forward to retriev you're head band. She then wore it on her forehead with pride she picked the color of dark blue witch kind of matched with her cloths but that wasen't the reason she picked it out it was very close color to the one in her brothers eyes she then was heading home to talk about it to her mother and father but most of all her brother she looked forward to him more than anything. She steped in her house and yelled"EVERYONE I PASSED" first thing she knew they all popped out and said "congradulations"in the same momment she coulden't have felt more proud. That night everyone was there to celebrate they made her favorite meal witch was a rather fancy recepy with meat and her dad said "You are just like you're brother" she felt even better at that momment her brother than said"If you want before the team recrute I can teach you a new technique" she then gazed at her brother in excitement and said"That would be just great I promise to give my 110%". She woke at just about 5:30 in the morning when he brother trew a bucket of water at her she did not mind since the earlier she learned with her brother the less she had to cope with the evil desert sun. Her brother than gave her a giant fan and said "You are wind element so you can use this take it as not only a weapon but a gift from me for passing as a gennin someday you will even be better than me if you want to you decide what you want to do with you're life not me". Naru was amazed from her new gift she did not know what to do with it it was confusing her and all but she new it was not going to be easy. She moved on and was quikly getting yousto her new fan it was similar to one of the members f Gaara's team it was some kind of pasty white with stars on it witch were some fregrence of dark blue almost black. When the day came to finally be at the team recrute were there was many other students who had also past she waited as to guys sat next to her she both knew them from the academy but she never really talked to her but they would usually be bothering her with training with her brother by figthing in the middle of the training ground. Sometimes it made her giggle a little from how stupid they looked she din't care dough she usually kicked them and yelled "WHY CAN'T YOU FIGHT SOMEWERE ELSE?"but it din't really changes they just stayed there punching and kicking each other times they would both gaze off at the place she kicked...She would usually stay in her corner at the academy so that nobody bothered her trainin when a chunnin finally announced her name in team 14"Team 14: Naru Miso, Cress Kisa and Corry kim. She then got her picture taken for documents about her being Ninja and her ninja folder. After having the precise information about were to go to meet her sensei she went and visit her brother at home they trained so she could use her wind fan a little better after a day well spent she went to be easily. The next morning Naru woke up early in order to be training a little so she knew she was reading for her first day as a gennin she walked down the street looking at people screaming in fear she was confused then saw someone dead on the floor she looked at that person and walked up in the oposite direction of everyone else she wanted to get to her favorite training place. She then saw a kid a year older than her smiling people told her to run when she could but she din't see why he might have seemed cruel but she could see trew the cruel eyes there was someone seeking for sympathy she then heard a girl yell across the street "GAARA-SAN STOP IT HE DIN'T DO ANYTHING TO YOU" he looked away and said "he was selling his fruit overpriced I tough he needed a lesson"she walked off seeming scared as everyone was mumbling "Crazy Gaara he's a big monster ad that is obvious look at him he kills everyone in this village"or at least soemthing near she felt bad for him but din't say anything she walked off to go to her training area speachless. She went there a few minutes in advace trowing her shuriken and so when she noticed Cress and Corry there standing and blushing she was quite confused but din't say anything. It was a few minutes to wait for the sensei to arrive he looked silly dressed as a dragon the only thing you could see that looked like a humain wre his small black eyes he then said"Hello I am croc-man and I will be you're sensei even dough I am dressed as a dragon I want you to take me serously" that made Naru laugh as she was confused why would a Jounnin be dressed as a dragon how was she supposto take this guy serious "croc-man" was that even a actual name she was staring at the clouds wondering how old did he think they were they were real ninjas that mighet have worked on academy students but not on them she then heard croc man speak some more as he said"I wanna know each of you better before I test you to see if you guys are worty for my teaching you the girl first" she was kind of confused se usually was not first for things but she din't mind she then said"Follow my brothers path I wanna be a great ninja like him" Croc man looked at her eyes and said "good you curly hair" Corry knew he was the only one with curly hair so he then started to talk "Win a fihgt" he then saw croc-man say in a confused tone"Okay great now the last one you tell me what you want" Cress was watching an thinking he then said"Protect a certain person I love" he looked at Naru in the eyes as Corry did aswell but Naru was barely listening as she watched the clouds Croc-man then said "Great now I will test you tomorrow if you are worthy of ym training so see you tomorrow same time same place" they all walked in different directions but then Corry said"Hey Naru wanna train with me for the test we will have tomorrow even dough we don't know what it will be" Cress face was showing his deep emotion of anger but he din't say anything for a few seconds then he said"I WAS ABOUT TO SAY THAT! I AM TRAINING WITH HER" they then started fighting with a seasies of kicks and punched Naru was once again confused today and said "We can jsut train togheter you know" both guys said in a dreamy voice "OOOKKKAAAY" then Naru said"Great" then but guys said at the same time once again"But I am not beside him!" She found corry and cress very confusing and stuff but she din't show it as she showed how she manipulated her giant fan to make large vagues of wind they were very amazed she went home at sunset to eat and go to bed right after. Next morning to wake up her brother trew water at her head she laughed to the rather funny gag and went to eat breakfast she was slowly walking to the training ground the same day to do witch ever test they had in store she was wondering what would it be. She learning everything needed at the academy and then remembered the one thing she din't do the tree climbing extra credit project the only one who did it in the whole class was this kid who had a name she coulden't remember. She walked to the training ground knowing what she had to do.
She saw Corry and Cress there they obviously came there before her. They once again said something at the same time witch was"So what do you think the test is? STOP SAYING THE SAME THINGS AS ME AT THE SAME TIME AS ME!" Naru stayed on the sand ground and said "I don't know" knowing full well that she did know what the step was Croc-man came along with his arm full of daisys witch he was burning with Katon then eating he then did a sound near a satisifed slurp and said"Today we are doing tree climbing but not on threes I am a part earth element user so I will make a will for you to climb on" he made a large wall and said "If you manadge to climb this big wall before sunset I will train you with full effort and get you to do what you dream about if not you are on you're own use you're kunai to keep track of how high you are going to keep track of you're improvement" Naru was confused of how she was able to predict that so easily she got out a Kunai and tried a first time she was thinking why he din't explain how to do it maybe he use's that as a mental challenge...she was thinking hard how could she do it she then was thinking her chakra could go on her feet and she could then stick to the wall. She tried her plan witch worked for about 3-4 meters before she fell Corry and Cress looked confused about what to do they watched her dreamily when they both had the idea at the same time to put the chakra on there feet to stick. She tried for a few hours she kept getting closer and closer to the top but never seemed to reach it dough. She had the right method but just coulden't reach the top. She was almost out of chakra what was even worse was the fact the the sunset was so close it was amazing. She had one last bit of chakra she knew it she used it she then ran with all her strenght and when she was close to the top she then closed her eyes she din't want to see herself fall but she kept running then she opened them and notoced she was at the top of the cliff she joyfully smiled and did a peace with he fingers but in this case it did a "v" for "Victory". Croc-man smiled and said "I will be seing you tommorow Naru for the others you have one try before I leave and only train Naru" the others looked rather nervous but them to got to the top. They found it amazing how long chunk they passed but they smiled and did a "V" with the're fingers aswell. Naru walked home all sweaty took a long bath to calm herself down and relax. She did not eat but went to bed right away after her bath. She woke up the next morning to eat some rice and get to the same training area she sat there and waited. For about 5 minutes she was there alone but once again at the same time Corry and Cress arrived with a light morning jog looking at each other as if they were going to be giving each other a beating. Croc-man came 20 minutes later as his late sickness was becoming more intense he then said "Kazekage announced that there was going to be a chunnin exam unfortunately we are not going you have just became a gennin so for now we will be doing our first d-rank mission oh and we have to take a team photo first. They took the picture as picture. The pose was strange she was on the side smiling normally when croc-man was smelling Cress's hair and Corry was doing bunny ears to cress never the less Naru liked the picture. So the mission was simple to bring someone to Konoha under protection. The woman was ritch and needed an escorte since she never knew who could attack her she did not have many ennemies but she still wished an escorte. Naru found it rather suspiscious but dint say anything about it the woman could have dressed as an average person and walked savely. They walked for about 2 hours staying near not really talking before Croc-man said "Okay we will take a lunch brake to eat lunch the menu I have in my bag is turtle eggs" everyone did a scared face as they mumbled "Turtle eggs gross"or so. They were looking at it as if it were the worst thing ever possible of course to them it was. So they just sat down and watched Croc-man eat the meal as if there was nothing better in life. They found it rather unpleasent to see little babies being eating them and injoying it. She was thinking of how could a guy get closer to a crocodile his name was croc-man stading for Crocodile-man, he was wearing a suit of a dragon/crocodile, he was eating the same kind of food what kind of sensei was that insane? But never the less she saw how easily he manipulated the earth he was no ordinairy Junnin she hated to admit it but he brother was easily killed by this guy. She stud there thinking of how hungry she was and suddenly remembered she had brought some rice and fish she mumshed it up along with her team mates as she shared. She found it good. As for Croc-man he barely payed attention to anything but his food witch Naru barely concidered as food. They walked for about 4 more hours til sunset when Croc man finally dicided to set up camp they were half way to Konoha. They were setting up camp when Croc-man said" I will go get dry wood and water stay here and be nice" and they did so until a masked man attacked them. He yelled "Sorry but the woman you have must die" Naru reconised the voice but stayed quiet. Corry and Cress went in attack mode and got there Kunai's out the masked man was obviously way stronger than any of them he then quick tried hitting Naru. She quikly dodhged but she knew it was a matter of seconds before he hit her. The two others protected her and said "You're the girl we must protect you and the other one!" they got in front of Naru she din't want to be put down because of her Gender but nothing could get into their hard heads is what she knew most about them.
The next thing she saw they were both on the ground the man had stabbed both of them with a shuriken and cut theire necks with his kunai. Croc-man came running in the area and summoned a mass out of one of his scrolls (witch he grabbed out of his costume)He bashed the guy and burned him into crisps with a fire jutsu . Naru was amazed by Croc-mans true power and so Naru grabbed the mask off the face of the guy and noticed with tears in her eyes it was her brother her own brother Croc-man was rather confused and said"You know him?" Naru did not talk for a few seconds and said "He is my brother" she backed of and keept asking loudly "WHY...WHY..WHY?" he was still concient and said with large pain "Orochimaru needed money for an experiment and so he said he would make me stronger if I got him money from this lady" her eyes opened larger as she said "You idiot you were going to kill me for that?"
he then said "Not you" she got mad and tears of fury were coming out of her eyes she coulden't believe it her own brother. She then said "brother you are a discrace" she backed of and trew his body for in the bushes she had no clue why who was orochimaru anyways some kind of wack job she then was thinking would he really do this to her she convinced herself that he was hypnotised could Nii-san really do that.
As so she and Croc-man brought the lady to konoha and as she hated to talk about the Chunnin exam since if she were there none of that would have happened. She was also suspicious why was Gaara no longer killing people they would even talk some times. But she always felt bad since everyone treated him as a monster.
 Naru--san · Sun Apr 08, 2007 @ 06:06pm · 0 Comments |
