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Alot of Doom. And stuff.
Feh. I need no description.
Emo poem #2.
In a hallway far from here
there lay a girl who lay in fear
she was cold and she was young
body numb, frigid tongue

icy breaths racked her chest
the spider crawled from it's woven nest
black silk spun fine
a thousand steps, deathly shine

slithering snakes with flickering flames
burning lives and erasing names
no one was left in the house that died
except the girl who never spoke and only cried

she could not speak
she never learned how
she could not stand
she lived to bow

she lives alone
with the spiders and snakes
her body trembles
quivers and shakes

biting her softly drawing blood
lethal poision fatal nudge
the girl that only learned to cry
is the the only girl that doesn't die.






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chibisennyo19
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 08, 2005 @ 02:06am
EMO!! I actually like it... it was quite good for being emo.. props! blaugh


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 09, 2005 @ 06:52am
Yeah, that was definately emo, but I still liked it. surprised



King-bloods-2
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Enigma_Z
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 13, 2005 @ 08:01pm
cool!...damn i'm pathetic...i can't write poems!


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 24, 2005 @ 07:13am
<center>"Damnit muffins! You and your creativity have me hooked to this poem!"



Fatal Attraction
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