The Unknown Eye, is the first of three stories i am curently writing, i am mainly writing in this one right now but the other ones are: Elan fighting spirit, and Please save me. I'll tell you about those latter, The Unknown Eye is about a world of elves and the ancient egyption RA eye, Mita Dokode and Evi (V) Hitori both carried the RA eye are from different villages engaded in war but before the war they were in love with each other and planing on getting married. Mita's father would not except their love for one another, so she was forced to marry her childhood friend Taru Bic which gave her a son she named Taro. When the war started her son and husband were killed, Mita produced a spell that her son would be reborn but what she didnt know was that any child she would have would also be reborn once dead. As Mita fights with the others that carry the RA symbol she is captured and meets up with Evi and they are still in love with one another. Evi is the leader of the northern (dark) villages army and Mita of the southern (light), Mita and Evi marry in private and she is pregnant with Evi twins. Rumors of their marrage spread to both sides on how they betrayed each of their own kind, when Mita gives birth to her twin daughters Ima, and Yori, Evi is killed right in front of her. Mita is so angered that she is overpowered by her RA eye and kills the northern army leaving her, her twin daughters, and her beloved Evi. Mita kneeled down next to Evi and took off his amulet around his neck and placed it gently over his heart as it took the power of his RA eye inside plus his heart, soul, and memories. She looked at her twin daughters Yori looked more like Evi, and Ima looked a lot like her, she put the amulet around Ima and prayed that the amulet will stay with her no matter what, and she gave Ima the last name Hitori and Yori the last name Dokode. Once she returned to the southern village they killed her and her twin daughters claiming whoever has the RA symbol is to powerful to live among them and will be put to death.
Years go by and Yori and Ima are reborn same with Taro, and the battle against the RA eye starts. Ima and Yori are born as one and split into two different bodies and are put through many tasks meeting frineds on the way. Will they give up their lives to save others with the RA symbol or will they watch their true friends die in front of their eyes.
this is a preview of my story that i am still in the process of writing if you would like to read on what i have so far go to this site
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1765630
to let you know my name is one of my characters from my story you can say shes my fav out of the girls and leo is my fav out of the boys
Enjoy!!!!!!!!
 amari_with_ra_eye · Sun Feb 27, 2005 @ 08:58am · 0 Comments |
