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my most famous poem up to date i am the darkness from within, i am where it all begins. i am the light from the past, never forgotten for i'm not the last. i am the fire from the heart, eternal love will never part. we are the water and the wind, close your eyes and see the twin. i am the earth now bestowed, i heal your mind and your soul. bound togetter we are all but apart we will fall.

Posted by: darkrock64 Fri Sep 08, 2006 @ 04:33am

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Commented on: Wed Sep 20, 2006 @ 11:37pm


	Bravo! But i think i herd of one like that...

Commented on: Thu Sep 21, 2006 @ 04:36am


	no u didnt u never heard it before i made it up u see this is my ha tortal!

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The~Real~Modern~Santa
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Commented on: Tue Dec 26, 2006 @ 07:12am

Commented on: Sat Jan 20, 2007 @ 05:33pm


	So I don't know you or anything but I'm just searching people's journals to be lazy and found yours. My biggest critique is that the rhyming seams forced. Never force a poem to rhyme, it's ok if it doesn't, what's important is that you convey your emotions or really whatever you want through what you say.

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