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Wyren_Nitemare
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[x]Betrayal.[x]


It is dark and dim my mind is cluttered,
As a sit on my bed I can't help but shutter,
Who's there, Whispering in my ear?
Who's calling me, It's not the darkness I fear,
It's you.
Let me lie on in my bed, let me sleep,
Nightmares taunt me, these memories I must keep,
But I'm afraid, you are the cause my dear,
You're the one calling me, it's not the darkness I fear.
It's you.
Because I know what evil lurks in your twisted mind,
I must remember to help find,
The courage to get rid of you, to let alone the night,
Because when I see you, it's all in fright,
A droplet runs down my cheek a single tear,
Because you're the once calling, it's not the darkness I fear,
It's you.
Remember when we used to be in love,
And even the angels were jealous above,
But we could sing together, and it was such a sweet lullaby,
I tried to bring you back, I did nothing but cry,
But when you come, it was never quite clear,
Because I didn't know you were the one calling, it's not the darkness I fear,
It's you.
Send your demons, they have no life,
But you must will them to move, your heart fills with strife,
We had loved, I remember it still,
We would cuddle close, and watch the rain hit the windowsill,
Did I let you die? I'll never know,
But for now I must remain, slient and alone,
And now, as I see it, the end draws near,
For when I dream, it's not the darkness I fear,
It's you.

But what I will never know, until you succeed;
If you were really in love, would you do this deed?






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Black Sharpie
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comment Commented on: Mon May 08, 2006 @ 02:33am
Mm. I love it.

Most (one or two lines aren't favored too much) lines are beautiful. Truly amazing gift.


comment Commented on: Wed May 10, 2006 @ 07:43am
.:sniff:.
beautiful.



e m u
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Panic!_at_the_Tragedy
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comment Commented on: Fri May 19, 2006 @ 05:00pm
Love is like poison. It feels good when you drink it and it goes down your throat, but sooner or later it will slowly drain your life away.


comment Commented on: Sat May 20, 2006 @ 01:18am
Tis good



Gitomoshuu
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Megumi_is_me
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comment Commented on: Sat May 20, 2006 @ 09:35pm
Once Apon a time I had a poetry named Betrayal
as well
But yours is definitally better
And it doesnt matter because mine is lost in the wind --

Anyways you definitally have the skill to become a writer if you wish
Go for it


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