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The Trials of Phantasy
Phantasy - everything and anything that has to do with the creative imagination.
Revelation


Tomorrow will be,
but today you are.
Believe you can see,
then you'll go far.

Accept help from peers,
hear what others say.
Stomp down your fears
and find your own way.

You're strong & smart
so keep up the fight.
Go follow your heart,
climb to a new height.

While you've got the chance,
fly high as you can.
Life is a great dance
with no bounds or ban.






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StellaLuna00
Community Member





Sat May 03, 2014 @ 05:51pm


A little piece that, I have to say, turned out quite well for a first successful attempt at using rhyme! I tried in the past and it never worked - just bogged me down until I lost the poem. It was kind of odd actually. I had no intention of using rhyme (blank verse is my prefered style after all) but the rhyme flowed into the poetry without me realizing it!

I have written this poem for my department and because its an inspirational poem I titled it "Inspiratum" for them. But in reality it is based on a revelation that I had during a really dark and painful time that I went through a few years back. I survived, won the fight you could say, thus the title here.


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