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The Exiled Prince By: Miranda Southard To My Best Friend Ashley Love You Bro! <3 Atahuti Hor Auset Haji Chapter one The Beginnin
The Exiled Prince
By: Miranda Southard










To My Best Friend Ashley Love You Bro! <3





Atahuti
Hor
Auset
Haji






















Chapter one
The Beginning of the End



Bast, Yelled my so called father, go to the Nile and get some water we’re running out!
Yes of course, replied a beautiful Egyptian girl with hair the color of the sun and shimmering amethyst eyes and the perfect weight for an 18 year old girl(I’m not kidding I am perfect, for a girl that’s treated like a slave).
I grabbed one of our pots and began to head down to the Nile, this day was colder than usual just like all the other days we had ran out of water.
I guess I just keep getting lucky, I said to myself.
What are you getting lucky about, a deep booming voice came out of nowhere. I looked to my side and saw a handsome man with deep brown eyes and a mixture of purple and black hair but he was weak with no muscles he was obviously a noble.
Uuumm the weather the last few times I’ve come out to get water it’s been cold out.
I know I’ve noticed you walking out to the river on all the cooler days.
Uuugghhh, okay.
Oh no I haven’t been watching you, that’s my house over there I see you from the veranda at my bedroom.
But that’s the palace?
Yes I am the prince.
Oh I’m so sorry your highness; it’s just that I’ve never seen you before!
But I hold celebrations for everyone in this town?
I know my family doesn’t allow me to go I stay home with the slaves and clean.
That’s not right you are a proper Egyptian woman are you not?
I am they just well…… I don’t know what their problem is.
Oh well I’ll have to do something about that.
No it’s all right, I better hurry up or my father will get mad. I ran from the prince, back to my house with a pot filled with water.
Wait…..I didn’t get your name! He yelled to me but I kept running fearing my father’s wrath.
Why the hell were you so late, Hotep, my father, yelled in my face.
The… the prince, he walked up and began to talk to me. I replied.
Why would the royal family want anything to do with a lonely slave girl?
He said I was a proper Egyptian woman! Too good to be YOURE SLAVE, just like all the rest of us.
What did you say to me! He slapped me so hard I fell off my feet spilling all of the water i had collected onto the floor of our hut.
Now, go back to the Nile and get more water.
But you spilled it why don’t you!
I don’t have to explain myself to you now go before the snakes wake up.
I hastily threw myself out of the hut carrying the pot once more to the Nile. I looked up to the veranda the prince had pointed to earlier and sure enough he was sitting there looking down to all of Thebes then he noticed me.
Hey what are you doing back!?
My father got angry…….
I’m sure he then realized the large purple mark staining my perfect alabaster skin on my face.
Oh I see……
I carried on my way to the river then put the pot under and allowed it to fill with water picked it up onto my head and began to walk back then noticed a tall brunette man with baby blue eyes and he was muscular definitely not a noble, sitting across from the prince, I knew I’d be seeing him in my dreams.
Apparently he felt someone’s eyes on him for he looked around and his gaze landed on me. I felt my heart begin to pulse faster and my cheeks turn red I then dropped my gaze then scurried away not knowing what roll he would play in my long abnormal life, and he just ignored what had happened not knowing who I was destined to be(figures).
So Bast how was your day? My older sister a redheaded girl with perfect green eyes said.
The usual, father was a first class jerk today.
Yeah; but anything new?
Well I figured out that the prince is stalking me.
Really, now I’m jealous I wish father made me the slave the prince is well, him. He’s so handsome!
Not really.
What’s eating at you? How the hell does she know when something’s bothering me!
Well I saw this one guy not a noble and he didn’t look normal to me.
So he was ugly then?
No quite the opposite.
So he’s SEXY then?
Uuugggghhh, yeah? Totally inappropriate.
So what?
He was definitely not a noble but he was sitting with the pharaoh.
Maybe he was asking for a favor?
No it was like they did that every day the prince didn’t even seem to care if he was there.
Oh you must be talking about Apries the princes guardian he protects him from any threat. A man about 23 years of age with black hair and green eyes poked his head through the window.
What are you doing here?
Yeah we don’t even know you.
And you never will the man left.
Our neighbor is such a freak!
Serenity calm down no he’s not he’s just different okay?
Okay.
Bast what the hell do you think you’re doing stop talking to serenity and clean now! Hotep interrupted.
Sorry sir of course, I got up and began to pick up things that weren’t in their right place and set them down where they belonged then I began to get rid of the unnecessary dust and sand on the floor (impossible task).
Look here you little rat don’t talk to my daughter ever again or else!
Yes of course.
After i had finished cleaning i crawled into bed and quickly drifted off into sleep.
What where am I?
A bunch of glowing hieroglyphs were swirling around me in an array of magnificent colors. Then they just stopped and a scene began to unravel.
&a mp;a mp;nb sp; You want to finish our conversation Bast? It was the man who was with the prince.
Yes and by the way what do you mean you don’t have any family?
That’s what you wanted to talk about?
Yes it sounds interesting.
When I was little my father abandoned me and my mother she said it was to protect us, a few years after my father left the village was burned down I was only a kid my mother and little brother died In that FIRE.
My dream was shattered by the rays of the morning sun dancing on my eyes forcing them to flutter open.
i stood up and changed into my only other outfit.
I guess I better take this down to the river and wash it.
i darted out the door before anybody could stop me and made my way to the Nile.
I wish clothes where easier to wash i complained to myself.
Everyone does. Sighed a familiar voice.
I jumped ugh who are you?
I’m Apries.
Of course you are.
I looked to my side but there was no one there.
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh? Strange. (I’m a nut case!!)
I stood up and walked back home. Only to find that my father was on a rampage and it seemed like he was planning to take it out on me.
That little rat why the hell did she think it was okay to leave I’m going to kill her.
I walked in our hut casually, hey sorry I left so early I went out to wash my clothes because they were so filthy.
You shouldn’t have come back now you’re as good as dead!
He snatched me up by my hair and began to drag me down through the city of Thebes back down to the Nile.
Please stop you and I both know this is foolish father!
Don’t call me father ever again! He tried to throw me into the now menacing waters of the Nile but I wrapped my arms around him to keep myself from flying. And the next thing I knew I was as small as my father’s hands.
He ran from me screaming demon child, demon child throughout the city of Thebes.
Well looks like I can never go home. I looked down into the once more shimmering waters of the Nile only to find that I was a beautiful rat fur like the sun and deep purple eyes then I was back to my normal self within seconds. I sat down leaning up against the wall of the palace and buried my face in my hands. Knowing that there was no hope and I would soon die of starvation or heat stroke.
For days I had been on the street begging for food and money but not one soul was kind enough to give it to me so I just stopped asking.
I’m going to die out here no one has been kind to me and I’m going to starve.
I had been telling myself for days.
Bored I then picked up a stone with my shaky hands and threw it, I watched it till it faded out of sight.
Here take this came another familiar voice.
I looked up only to see Apries looking down at me with no facial expression.
Thank you, is there anything I can do for you? Like I’d actually do something for him.
No, I don’t need anything.
Well if you change your mind just tell me okay, Apries?
How did you know my name?
Uuugghhh, wild guess?
Tell me.
My old neighbor told me before my father kicked me out.
How would he know my name no one but the council knows who I am.
Don’t ask me he just stuck his head through my window and told me who you where.
What did he look like?
Black hair, Green eyes, scrawny, and he was about 23.
Of course he was. Apries strode back to the palace.
From that point on Apries returned everyday and gave me food. He is officially the love of my life!
Hey Bast I’m so sorry I couldn’t come sooner father wouldn’t let me leave the house. Serenity stated.
`It’s alright. I replied.
No its not you’ve been starving out here.
No I haven’t.
What do you mean?
Who’s this? Apries interrupted.
She’s my older sister.
You didn’t tell me you had a sister.
I didn’t think it was necessary. I saw my father advancing toward us.
Serenity saw him too.
Don’t even think about coming home you little rat Serenity yelled in her face. Then sashayed away.
Here, Apries gave me some food then left.
Why didn’t he stay to talk today, he usually does. Aawww is he afraid of the demon child, what a baby.
Then out of nowhere someone grabbed me and dragged me into a large
group of people. I began to look around curious what was going on, and then I heard a man begin to speak.
King Aknamcommon died last night in his sleep and his son shall take his place
on the throne we have gathered everyone here because he must choose a queen
to rule beside him.
The prince then stood in front of the populous of Thebes and began to
search the crowd for a woman he knew he could trust, love, and one that he knew
could rule a kingdom with a kind heart, and loving personality.
It’s not going to be me. I’m too untrustworthy.
Then he raised his arm and pointed into the crowd at the very last girl to have
Arrived, all the girls got excited thinking he was pointing at them some even began to fight each other.
One of the guards came up to me.
Excuse me miss will you come with me?
Oh um of course. The guard led me to the front of the crowd
Now could you all simmer down, the pharaoh began.
They continued on with what they where doing.
Excuse me?
Let me pharaoh, Apries commanded.
Of course.
All of you shut up and stand still now!
It was silent for a while.
Who the hell do you think you are telling us what to do! A random girl from the crowd yelled
I am the guardian of the pharaoh.
No you’re not, the pharaoh began, you are my most trusted advisor, so do as he says.
There were a few grumbles of dissaprovment but they did as they were told.
What is your name I never got it? The pharaoh asked.
My name Is Bast.
People of Thebes, the pharaoh began; this is your new queen Bast!
The villagers began to get angry.
What’s wrong with her?
Pharaoh are you blind?
She’s the demon get away from her!
Demon?
It’s a long story.
Well tell it to me later.
Of course, oh and hello once again Apries.
Hey, he replied.
How do you know him?
Also a long story.
Tell me along with the other one then.
Chapter two

Who Bast Really Is





Really, so then he saved your life it seems you owe him? The pharaoh questioned.
Sorry to say that I do. I said hastily
Apries sat there smirking.
I see well that rids all hope of me staying alive. A man of about 23 with black hair and green eyes said.
Wait a second, i began, are you stalking me or something?
Oh no, I thought you said that was the pharaoh did you not?
Wait but I told you I wasn’t stalking you Bast. He butted in
Well…… it’s hard to believe a guy who says he watches you go down to the river.
Okay I kinda get that.
Wait can someone please tell me what he’s doing here.
He’s one of the council he lives here.
But he’s my neighbor?
Actually the queen asked me to keep an eye on you.
Really the queen said go stalk some village girl named Bast.
Oh ugh no she told me to WATCH a new born girl that fit your description.
So you where five and she told you that while she was pregnant?
Yes.
It might not have been what she meant.
It was she said the Ra told her about you.
And she was crazy!
Hey! The pharaoh yelled.
Sorry.
It’s fine.
No she wasn’t, the king also saw you in a dream but unlike the queen he didn’t know what to make of the message.
Well then what did the message mean?
She said that you were to play an important role in the distant future and you must be protected at all costs.
Well thanks for helping me all those times my father abused me and helping me survive while I was out on the streets with no food.
Those times where unnecessary to need to help, your father wasn’t going to kill you and Apries was providing you with food.
Pft, Douche. I mumbled.
What?
Hm?
What did you just say?
Nothing are you hearing things? We may need to take you to a doctor?
That’s unnecessary.
Well when you start hallucinating don come crying to me.
Whatever.
a**, I mumbled.
Bast?
Hm?
Just forget it.
Apries began to laugh.
Good he finds me entertaining but to bad he cant have me, we can still be friends! I thought to myself.
Bast you just hate him don’t you?
Well he did stalk me my whole life, and he’s a creeper so……..
Now that’s just not nice, The Pharaoh said
Sorry.
No its okay we all know its true.
HEY! Mahad butted in, am not!
Nobody cares about your opinion.
He is not! Hor-Em-Hebi testified.
Nobody cares about your opinion either.
Wai….
Just shut up, Apries intervened.
He…..
Oh I almost forgot Apries Bast needs a new dress, go and get her measurements. The pharaoh interrupted
Of course, follow me.
Right, I sighed.
Wait why is he having Apries take my measurements shouldn’t a woman do this?
This is so….. ugh, I thought to myself.
Right down here.
Okay.
He led me down to a small room at the end of the hall and took my measurements, he didn’t tell me of course but after leaving the room I don’t remember what happened the next thing I knew I was on a bed in this medium sized room with Apries and the pharaoh leaning over me.
Hey are you alright? Apries questioned
Yeah I think, what just happened?
I don’t know you just passed out.
Oh well…….
Are you sickly? The pharaoh butted in.
No why would you ask that?
Its just something we need to know.
Of course, how did I get here?
Apries carried you.
Right.
Is there anything I can get you? Auset a beautiful Egyptian woman with brown hair and deep brown eyes offered.
No, but thanks for the offer.
You are welcome.
I then noticed a guard standing at the door looking nervous as ever.
Your highness, (whoa he speaks!) I have news or well information your mother asked me to tell you 18 year ago on this exact day at this exact time.
What is it?
The girl who you are sitting with now is not human she is the only hope Egypt has left for its survival, she is none other than the Daughter of RA!
Are you kidding me? The Pharaoh sounded dumbfounded.
No sir!
Wow, Bast why didn’t you tell me this?
Hey I am not I am a mortal!
That’s so what your mother would say.
Yeah it is have you ever met my mother?
No, but if my mother says it, it is so.
Yeah right.
Apries aren’t I right?
Yes of course your highness.
Hey! I know who I am!
Really then who’s your father? Apries questioned.
Hotep.
Wrong! Its Ra.
No its not what is your problem gosh! (okay he is now even hotter than before!!!)
I don’t have a problem, do you?
Yes, You!
Me what?
You’re my problem!
That’s not correct I am here to help.
Well your not helping.
Help is unnecessary right now.
Really I just fainted and don’t act like poor Mahad.
(I win!)
Yes of course. He said reluctantly.
Do you say anything else?
Well yeah. He said and I swear after that he mumbled b***h.
Really, just really, b***h? Is that a compliment to you?
I don’t know what you’re talking about.
Liar.
How would you know?
Maybe I’m physic….
Really? Hor-Em-Hebi butted in.
Apries and I both gave him a glare indicating that he’s an idiot.
Well you didn’t need to be mean. He said depressed.
I think we did. Apries and I said in unison.
Wow, well you two must be the best of friends. The Pharaoh intervened.
Not really… I said.
Yeah…..Apries said.

That awkward conversation went on forever and at some point I blacked out, the very next thing I was aware of was Hor, a boy of about 16 with long white hair and eyes as blue as the sky, entering the room arm waving in the air face grim.
Pharaoh, Sister there are strange men outside and they wont let anyone in. he said in a hurry.





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