Ricardo Bonvite Sreline
Autio Ainoa
Matching/Balance/Flow: 10/15
Theme: 9/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 12/20
Total: 36/50
Comments: I think this looks okay, but there are a few problems that just throw this off to me. The shorts bulge out oddly and the headband over the bandage is just sort of weird. I think if the bracelets were replaced with another white items(maybe those bracers), then it would also help contribute to the look while still looking low-budget.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 14/15
Theme: 7/10
Characterization: 3/5
Overall Impression: 13/20
Total: 37/50
Comments: I like this, but this is sort of contradicting the first and last avatars because she looks more like she's practicing a hip hop routine rather than whatever other style she's doing. The only thing on the outfit that really works are the tights. (the headband can pretty much be on any girl and the shoes look like Converse) Color matching is great and I can see she's hard working.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 14/15
Theme: 9/10
Characterization: 4/5
Overall Impression: 16/20
Total: 43/50
Comments: She looks sort of bored rather than excited which I dislike. The color scheme is not pulling me in too tightly but colors matched pretty well and the costume looks pretty cool for a dancer.
Jamais Changeant
Matching/Balance/Flow: 15/15
Theme: 9/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 19/20
Total: 48/50
Comments: This is my favorite out of your three. I liked everything(especially the stringy texture) but the random jumble of stuff on her hat which I think is the decorations and the huge black shoes.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 13/15
Theme: 9/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 16/20
Total: 41/50
Comments: Matching-wise, the only problem is the two golden rings on the Raider item. The huge white line in the middle of it all is sort of annoying to look at. The idea for this is entertaining and makes me think of those plays/movies that go through a dramatic scene with war paint and all. I wish arm poses could be used but no points were taken off for that.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 13/15
Theme: 10/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 17/20
Total: 45/50
Comments: First looking at your entries, this was actually my favorite, but then after a while I just favored the first one more. She definitely carries those dishes better now and is rocking her new outfit. There a some colors only in one place but usually you end up compensating for that really well.
VegetasBabie
Matching/Balance/Flow: 13/15
Theme: 10/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 11/20
Total: 39/50
Comments: This is a fairly well-done monochrome but gray could be brought to the feet. I'm still have yet to be amazed by monochromes though. I see so many with the same general shape and the items.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 10/15
Theme: 10/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 11/20
Total: 36/50
Comments: I'm sort of in the middle on like and hate. The black splotches in this are so abrupt and the textures clash a bit but character-wise, she actually looks lighter and the yellow just sort of spills onto her which is a cool effect.
Matching/Balance/Flow: 13/15
Theme: 9/10
Characterization: 5/5
Overall Impression: 15/20
Total: 42/50
Comments: The final outcome of it all is nice but considering blue and yellow were first to come I'd rather see them being more dominant colors in this. The mint if in huge amounts around the head and not really balanced well. The little shocked expression thing at the side of her face isn't really needed and it blocks the rainbow in a weird way. I love seeing pastels and blacks being used together, as it usually turns out bad.
