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if any one cares. i wrote this little starting i was thinking of using for a book. read it if you want but if you do i plead that you send me a message or a coment about it.

THANK YOU

Story by christopher L

A guysish figure, in a jacket, turns down an alley. The alley, dark and damp, echoed the figure's bear feet. Looking up the wind blow off the figure's hood. "Its time." it said under its breath, "Their hear."

The arms of the figure flinged the jacked out as they appeared. In the hands of the figure where two sticks that left a faint glow on the alley walls. The glow hit the figure's face it was a girl no older then 16, 17. Her face was a little round with bangs almost covering her eyes. A mean look on her face for whats was coming.

Two dog looking animals appeared at one end of the alley and one behind her. They growled as they walked closer to her. Foam fell from between their teeth.

"Mostrols." She said quitely. "I hate these things."

From behind, the first monstrol attacked. The jacket whirled into the air when she struck it in the jaw. The monstrol fell in pain while the other two flew at her clawing her back. She feel to one knee and dropped both orange sticks that folded in on them self's. Blood splattered the ground as she dropped on to her face. The two remaining monstrols circled her waiting for their master that just entered the alley. When he got closer the doges went and stood next to him.

He said out of discuss and hate. "You thought you could get away huh? Run away and for get all that happened? Huh? Never thought we would come for you number 115? well now your dieing. Not so free now. Huh?" He lifted her head with his foot. "Worthless." moves his foot and lets her head hit the ground covered in blood. Walking away saying, "Eat her."

The monstrol dogs slowly start stepping foreword. When a faint voice comes to her ear. "Don't give up! Don't give in! Believe and win."

"I can't" she screams

The voice said again. "Don't give up! Don't give in! Believe and win."

"I can't!" she screams again. then an orange light shot from her eyes and then everything went black.


* * *

Two men sat back into their chairs. They where watching a tv screen. The man on the right said quitely in his graveling voice, "She has lots of potential."

"That she does." the left man said in a higher pitched squeak. "To bad she ran away and then gets killed."

"She is not dead yet my friend." The man on the right smirked. "And I'm sure we will see her again." Turning in his chair. "Tell Zar its time to get ready. we have a job for him. Get orange."




the end for now. i will keep you posted when more comes out. smile