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Posted by: Hurrikan Sat Jan 07, 2006 @ 08:50pm

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Commented on: Sun Jan 08, 2006 @ 05:54pm


	Comments, critsisisms or chastisements! I'll take them all so comment away!

Commented on: Mon Feb 19, 2007 @ 04:55am


	Spelling...errors...in comments...causing mental fart. Any way, let's start off shall we? The writing invokes great mental images, vis-a-vis Manga-esque or probably tolkein like writing. There are just a few spelling errors, not enough to split your hairs over. The only things that bother me are: It really has a small voice. The writing really doesn't snag my attention first off. It really takes a minute(Seriously) to get into it. But when I do, it's actually fun for me. Chastisment-ty enough?

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