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Bumblebee's True Feelings
PlatniumFist sighed as she rested in her quarters. 'Nothing exciting.' she thought. 'I bet that Bumblebee's bored out of his mind too.' Speaking of Bumblebee, PlatniumFist hadn't seen him or Sari all day. 'That skinny little punk better not be getting himself or Sari in trouble.' she mentally snarled.
She stood up and wandered into the hallway, nearly ramming right into Prowl. "Whoa!" she gasped. "Careful!" "My bad." Prowl chuckled. "Say, you seen Bumblebee and Sari?" PlatniumFist asked him. Prowl just continued and shrugged. "Sorry. Haven't seen 'em." he said.
PlatniumFist groaned and shouted after Prowl, "Tell the others that I'm goin' out to find them!" With that, she walked outside, transformed into her Hummer form and drove around Detroit, searching for the young Autobot and the fleshling.
'If he got Sari arrested and himself impounded again, I'ma kick his skinny @$$.' PlatniumFist snarled. During the drive, she got bored and turned on her stereo..........of all the songs that came up first, it had to be "Bumblebee".
God, she was hearing his name everywhere nowadays. And yet, later she caught herself humming to the tune. She harshly turned the stereo back off. Why was she thinking about him when she was frustrated with him?
Suddenly, she rammed right into a wire fence. Snarling and cursing, she tried to drive back out. All of a sudden, she drove backwards sharply, almost ramming into a dumpster. She looked up and saw....of all the people she wanted to see right now, Bumblebee. He lifted the wire off of her and was trying to help her in. "Well, that's certainly a way to make an entrance." he chuckled.
Needless to say, PlatniumFist was not amused. With a snarl of her engine, she slammed on her gas pedal and zoomed through the hole in the wire fence in an attempt to run him over. "Yikes!" he yelped, jumping out of the way. "Calm down, Platnium!" Sari poked her head out from behind his head and shouted, "PlatniumFist, please just calm down!"
PlatniumFist liked this girl. She was her best human friend and respected Sari's wishes. With an inward groan, she transformed into her true form, seeing that it was obviously safe to transform. They were in an old, abandoned dump, after all. Not many humans were around to see them.
But that didn't stop her from punishing him. After accepting Sari's hug (which she had to exchange Bumblebee's shoulder for PlatniumFist's), PlatniumFist smiled at Bumblebee. A smile that began to make Bumblebee nervous. He could sense the anger brewing. And sure enough, she expressed it.
With a swift movement, she rammed the toe of her foot into Bumblebee's nuts. With a groan of sheer agony, Bumblebee slumped to the ground, holding his balls. Sari was both shocked and really amused to the point of trying to stifle a bout of laughter.
"That's for vanishing for half the day and taking Sari with you!" PlatniumFist snarled. "S-Sorry." Bumblebee said, struggling to stand up. "And what were you two doing out here!?" she scolded them. Sari giggled and said, "We actually had something for you."
PlatniumFist's anger seemed to melt away when Sari said that. ".....wha?" she said. "It was Bumblebee's idea actually." Sari nodded. PlatniumFist turned away and muttered, "Oh, great."
When Bumblebee regained the feeling in his genitals, he smirked and grabbed PlatniumFist by the wrist. "C'mon!" he said with that smile that was starting to make PlatniumFist all weak-kneed. He led her into an abandoned building on the premises. PlatniumFist's optics went wide. "Oh...My...God..." she gasped.
It was a true work of art. A beautiful flower made of scrap metal that Bumblebee and Sari polished until it shone in the sun. "For you." Bumblebee smiled at her. If she was human, PlatniumFist's face would've turned bright red. "M-Me!?" she gasped. Sari slipped off of PlatniumFist's shoulder and left the building, giving them one last smile as she left to wait outside.
"See..." Bumblebee said, rubbing the back of his neck nervously. "Why we were actually here is because....I needed Sari's help to make this. I was hoping that it would help me when I decided to tell you this." PlatniumFist was starting to get kind of suspicious and nervous.
Bumblebee cleared his throat and knelt down in front of her, lightly holding her hand and staring up into her optics. This gesture made PlatniumFist's heart pound heavily in her chest. "I know that I've just gotten on your nerves all the time. But....see.....um....." He sighed heavily and mumbled, "Can't find the right words."
PlatniumFist placed a fist close to her chest and said, "Uh-huh?" Bumblebee cleared his throat again and said, "Long version: I adored you from the moment I saw you and I hope I can always spend the rest of my life making it up to you. Short version: I love you."
PlatniumFist's heart skipped a beat. With a mixture of a shocked and a joyful expression, she said, "Please.....say that again..." Bumblebee stood up and, with a smile, said, "I love you." He brought his face close to hers. "I love you." His lips her about an inch away from hers. "I love you....so much."
With that, he locked lips with PlatniumFist and gently kissed her. PlatniumFist returned the kiss, refusing to let go. Eventually, the two pulled away for a breath of air. "I don't know where I could've found a more beautiful Cybertronian." Bumblebee told her. "Titania?" PlatniumFist chuckled.
"Evil's not my type." Bumblebee chuckled. Bumblebee took PlatniumFist's hand and led her outside. Sari looked up at Bumblebee, mentally asking him what she said. Bumblebee gave Sari a triumphant smile and a thumbs up.
"So, race you back?" PlatniumFist asked Bumblebee with a mischevious smirk. "Sure." Bumblebee smirked back. "Just don't hurt yourself, sweetheart." "Oh yeah?" PlatniumFist sneered. "Well, hope your hungry. Cuz you're about to eat my dust, punk!" With that, PlatniumFist transformed into her Hummer form and sped through the hole in the wire fence.
"Hey!" Bumblebee shouted after her, transforming into the Beetle and letting Sari into the front seat. With a laugh, Bumblebee sped after her. Bumblebee smiled on the inside. He knew he wouldn't regret telling PlatniumFist his true feelings.
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If you're wondering, yes, this short story is a BumblebeexOC thing. PlatniumFist is mine. Bumblebee belongs to Hasbro.

So, this is my first Transformers Animated story as well as my first Transformers story in general.

Enjoy!!!!





 
 
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