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Poem...need honest opinions 1st time i take poetry serious
Well basically i was sick when i wrote this on may wensday 20, 2009 and i have to say i was inspired by 1 of Americas best poetry writer of all time EDGAR ALLEN POE redface so plz be honset after reading the whole poem so here it is . ENJOY!!
I scream out loud every night
with no avail
I scream in pain
but yet not a single soul turns around
I scream in hopefulness
that for one day peace will reach me
I scream out to the heavens
and ask forgiveness
I scream in hysteria
For I know now that the pain is slowly draining me
Draining me of every ounce of blood and sanity within me
I scream in pain and agony
The agony slowly and painfully killing me within my very being
I scream out in mid broad-day light
but yet no one hears
I scream in pain in knowing every soul is lost
lost in a profound sleep
A sleep so deadly and yet so passionate
Oh, how I wish to bafall it
I scream...
I scream...
I scream...
I scream...!
Confusion reaches my soul
and I feel hands of hope and consulment
the fisrt time in my life I feel loved
I scream in Joy
I scream in HAPPINESS
I scream out of LOVE
He has finally turned around and awoken
By Yours Truly Daniela 200
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