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My storyz an poems and any other things i decide will be going in here sooo yeaa.....
THE FRATERNITY

*wakes up to cellphne alarm* uugghhhh dammit what time is it *checks Cell phone* *thinks* oh s**t it's saturday i forgot to turn off that alarm oh well i gotta go to the store and buy some freakin soda im out of it. *get's up puts on black jeans, white t-shirt and a black shirt on top of the tee and puts on black -n- white sweater with the zipper down and heads out the door And thinks* hmm what else should i buy my brothers probally want some candy or sumtin lemme call them *get's cell phone out of sweater's pocket and calls house sammy picks up the youngest of us 3*
Sammy: Hello who is it.
Luis: it's Luis do you or Carlos want anything from the store.
Sammy: *stutters* no i s-s-sleepin.
Luis: k oh i forgot to lock the door lock it now its's pretty early u dont want anyone to break in do ya.

Sammy: replies no i lock it.
Luis: dont forget well bye.
*i walk into the store as i walk in i see the soda so i grab 2 of em and walk to pay for them as im waiting in the long line i look at the tv and watch the news

News Guy: today in news a violent cult so called The Brotherhood have been Going in random house's murdering entire family's as they sleep as a intiation they last attacked a house on south franklin street.
*I think* that street it right next to mine oh my god i gotta get home *i drop the soda and run home*

Luis:i know my brother didnt lock the door s**t. i almost had a fight with a guy in that cult yesterday called his sister a slut rolleyes he was pissing me off. *my palms start sweating as i near my house when i get to the front i realize that the front door is open so i run in to find out if everything is okay and it is* *phew* *i calm down go to the fridge to get sumting to drink and notice that there is soda my dad must have bought it when he got outta work last night*


-many hours later 2:30am-


Luis: damn i should get some sleep. *as i start dosing off i hear a loud bangs that wakes me up scared and confused i run down the steps since i sleep in the attic i get to the 2nd floor and look to my right to see my parents room and notice the sheets are soaked in blood i scream angrily as i run down the steps to see sammy he sleeps on the couch stressed he is has a bullet hole in front of his head* * my other brother is nowhere in sight but i see a bloodtrail leading toward the door and realize they must have taken him* as i stand i here i am over filled with rage and anguish* *i hear a noise coming from the kitchen and look there is a guy in a black robe laughing with a bloody knife in his left hand and a gun in the right i cant make out his face but he runs at me i get up quickly dodge his knife kick him in left side of his left knee as falls to his knees i grab his knife and stab him in his left leg he screams and shoots me in my shoulder with the gun i fall and scream all the adreanaline knocks me out slowly as everything darkens his hood falls and i see his face he is the guy that i called his sister a slut his name was dante i get fully knocked out...





*wake up a few minutes later as i get up i run away from the house and into a alley and get the bullet out myself with the knife the guy left me .... *i think* i have nothing now nothing *fall asleep*


*i wake up the next day and head to the store to buy somthing to drink i still had 40$ people stare at me since im wearing this bloody shirt as i pay the soda i look at the tv to see the news about my experience*

News Guy: Another Brotherhood murdering happened early this morning at about 2:45 with 3 bodies 2 Rafael Navedo, Brunilda perez were stabbed to death and one Sammy Navedo was shot in the head 2 of the family members are missing Carlos Navedo, and Luis Navedo both presumed kidnapped and killed but officials are not sure

*picture pops up of me and carlos so i try to hide my face a little as i pay the clerk*

*as i am walking towards nowhere drinking i hear my cell ringing i look at the caller id it says unknown and i decide to pick up

Wesely Gibson: Hello.

Luis: umm hello who are you.

Wesely : My name is wesely i heard what happened to you.

Luis: Why the hell are you calling me

Wesely: I need your help I know how you feel my whole family is Dead... I actually was mind ******** into killing my own father by a man
named Sloan he lied to told me that cross was my father's killer as it turned out cross was my actual father... ******** he told me about this secret clan of weavers called themselves -The Fraternity- they figured out a secret code within a loom it gave names, names of people they had to assassinate to keep the balance of chaos in the world

Wesely:It was fate that gave the names .... it was... but sloan had ******** with it after he found out his name came up he took control of the loom and tricked his group of members and me into killing people for his own finances as it turned out his clans member's names all came up so they decided to side with him ..... but fox she was a ******** fanatic of the loom so she killed herself and lots of the memebers i've killed all of the others except one sloan himself and i need a decoy i need you i have transferred money and tickets to your account i will help you destroy the brtherhood i will train you to become a super assassin... So will you join me and rebuild The Fraternity become a Weapon Of Fate.

Luis: evil Yes I Will.

Wesely: Perfect come to chicago i will be waiting at the airport... *whispers* see you there.

Luis: Okay.






-Arrive at chicago airport-




*i stand there and a guy walks up 2 me and says*

Wesely: are you sure you're ready

Luis: Of Course twisted

Wesely: Okay your side of the plan is easy u just have to sit and mess with the computer at my old job type in wesely gibson in google he will stand behind you when he is he will be standing on a big X on the floor when u hear him behind you swing around as he noticies it's when he will be shot in the back of the head the bullet coming out of his forehead perfectly from my sniper.... it's that simple and give him a little smile to confuse him for a second.

Luis: it is pretty simple after this will you train me.

Wesely: Yes


-Later That Afternoon-

* You hear in the background of All the action
Wesely's voice giveing a sort of speech

Wesley: this isnt me being like my father...

this isnt me saving the world...

* i type into google Wesely Gibson come up no search results*

this is not me being a super assassin...

THIS IS NOT ME!!!

Sloan: Still trying to figure out who you are.

* i turn around in the office chair look at him and smile*

Sloan: Oh ******** eek


*the bullet comes out the front of his head some blood lands on me everything went just as planned i see this all in slow motion from the adreanaline*


-Time Starts rewinding the bullet going out the back of his head leaving the office and flying backwards to show where it came from-



-into a multi floor parking lot-

wesely : This IS ME taking CONTROL!!!
From sloan

From Work

From Fat Bosses

-the bullet goes thru backwords wesely's ex-boss janice's donut and car


Wesely: From Billing Reports

From cheating girl friends And sag of s**t Bestfriends.

-The Bullet dashes back in front of his ex-girl and ex-bestfriend who have been ******** each other behind wesely's back (he knew it for a very long time and was too much of a p***y to do anything about it) and goes thru backwords his friends energy drink( which he loves)

-it continues going backwords and goes thru the seperating part of a train( the high trains like subways but u gotta go up steps and they are above the streets)


Wesely: THIS IS ME TAKING CONTROL OF MY LIFE!

-the bullet goes backwords thru wesely's apartment window(it was open he didnt shoot thru it) and into his sniper



*he looks away from the sniper scope looks at YOU and says*

What The ******** Have You Done Lately.

-everything goes black-








TO BE CONTINUED





Teh-Outsider-Navedo
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    iZ00M
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    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 19, 2009 @ 07:41am
    Dayum ! Its Frickin Awesome ! blaugh
    Write More ! scream
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    i Love ! i Numero Uno Fan ! 3nodding


    commentCommented on: Sun Apr 19, 2009 @ 06:33pm
    Oh my god! Keep wrieting! It so amazing. Your very good. :]



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