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My Failing Writing Career
OK, so, many of you know that i love to write, but i'm horrible. here is my latest story that i am working on. i gave up on the last one. tell me what you think.
Ok, so this is here because Courtney wanted it to be. (i didn't wanna put it in yet) tell me wat u think. it is only PART of the "love" part in the begining. haha courtney.



When Gloria walked back through my door, I couldn’t believe it. She

really did come back. Now I just had to tell her. That was going to be

interesting.

“You made it,” I said, and ignored the sour look on her face.

“Yeah,” was the only reply I got.

“Are you sure that you want to go through with this?”

“Are you sure you want to ask me that question?”

“Touché.”

She sat on my bed, looking mad about something. I decided to let it

pass, and ignore the look she was giving me.

Women. I was never going to understand.

“Is there something you would like to say?” she asked bitterly, and

threw me another look. If looks could kill, I’d be dead already.

“Um…nope.” I said, trying my hardest to off set her mood. It wasn’t

working too well.

I guess she decided that she was over her mood, because her face

suddenly cleared up.

“Are we leaving tonight?” she asked sweetly. I knew she was up to

something. I just wasn’t sure what.

“If you want.”

“It’s now or never.”

“What time?”

“Midnight.”

“We’ll meet at the park.”

“Alright,” she said, and gave me such a peculiar look that I couldn’t

help myself. my thoughts ran wiled. I leaned closer to her, and looked deep

into her eyes. It didn’t

take her long to register what I was thinking, for she was suddenly in my

arms. She was shaking, and I looked down to find that she was crying.

Why are you crying? Did I do something wrong? Think something bad?

“Not you,” she replied tearfully, “me.”

I didn’t reply. As I gazed into her eyes, it struck me how innocent she looked. How beautiful. Her black hair framed her large, brown eyes. And her tan cheeks had a reddish tint from crying. Her hair smelled like strawberries, her favorite shampoo. I found myself wondering how I had never noticed before. And here she is, sitting on my lap, arms wound around my neck. She is mine. All mine.
I pulled her back, and looked into her eyes again. This time there was nothing stopping me. I leaned forward, and our lips met. She stiffened for an instant, and then melted into my arms.
My hands traveled up her back, tangling themselves in her hair. Just as I felt her hands in my hair. I leaned closer still, our bodies completely touching. It felt wonderful, like a dream come true. We could have sat here for ever, and I wouldn’t have cared.

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  • User Comments: [2]
    NIKNIK_76476
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    Wed Jan 28, 2009 @ 06:56pm


    OMG AMAZING MAGNIFICENT!!!!!!!!!!


    NIKNIK_76476
    Community Member





    Wed Apr 01, 2009 @ 11:32pm


    i JUST read it and it still gives me chills!!!!


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