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...My page to write whatever...
This is my page in which I write whatever I feel like writing, (as stated in title) this may consist of poems, random sayings, stories, and other things along those lines.
Anybody have a good name for me?
So this wins for "my most bizarre poem" but I like it. Its different from what I usually write. Hope ya like it.

Blue as the clear sky,
Ringed in shadows,
A cave opens to her soul,
And at the mouth sunflowers bloom.
A snowcovered slope leads to rose petals,
And down to a forest,
Dark and quiet in the winter months,
A pale face surrounded by life.
Laughter that hitches,
Like a hiccup or crying.
The blue is set upon an icy hill,
From the edge a river's trail,
Sliding down like a tearstain on her face.
Near the slope that leads to the rosepetals,
Stands two ditches deep in the snow,
Partially dug into the white,
Nothing left but two pale empty indents,
Scars on skin,
A smile bright like the summers sun,
Sitting under the slope and ditches.
Underneith the rose petals,
White marble slabs,
Hard polished rocks,
Like smiling teeth.
Whistling like a cheerful bird,
Cooing like a saddened dove,
Laughing,
Smiling,
And blue like the sky,
Is trully my shining eye.






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-TeapotDancer-
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 15, 2009 @ 03:08pm
whoa! LOVE IT!


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 16, 2009 @ 07:16pm
yay!



Rhiine
Community Member
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