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The darkness I tried to run But it was too fast I tried to esape But it was too strong I tried to call for help But it was too late Too fast to cetch me before I got away Too strong to hold me down while no one was around It was late to call for help because no one would know how to stop it The darkness was the only thing I saw as I was held down No Light No Warmth No Love No chance to stop it at all Now I remember that day like it never stopped I look at my child and I remeber .... That the pain never really stopped... Please tell me what you think

Posted by: Kagome(loves)Inuyasha Sat Oct 22, 2005 @ 11:49pm

The only one that can save the world from the darkness is you.But are you brave enough to stand up in the darkness when it pushes you down.

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Commented on: Sun Oct 23, 2005 @ 07:40pm


	Its good except for the raping part! blaugh

Commented on: Fri Nov 11, 2005 @ 12:58am


	I have to say, this is perhaps the worst poem I have ever seen. stare Next time you want to seek sympathy you really shouldnt try so hard.

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Commented on: Fri Nov 11, 2005 @ 01:07am


	I agree, this is a terrible attempt of a poem. Stop trying to fake something that didnt happen, man I hate people like this.

Commented on: Fri Nov 11, 2005 @ 06:56pm


	I write these poems from the heart every song I listen to has a poem in it or a hidden meaning .I try and show what I think the poem or meaning is so F* off try to see it my way.Listen to a song that you love and try to find the meaning then you can tell me my poems suck!!! scream evil stressed exclaim**

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Commented on: Fri Dec 30, 2005 @ 12:39am


	To say that gaia won't let me on my character Kagome(loves)Inuyasha so i made a new one it is Element_child

Commented on: Sun Feb 19, 2006 @ 03:23pm


	Lib, your creepy you know that? What song were you listenin to when you decided to write this? cause don't listenin to it again. Oh and the poem sucks. its more like a story complex thing going not a poem.

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