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poem.. i rub my face, thinking im a disgrace, i begin to cry, but i dont know why, i hug my knees, thinking my misary is a disease, my heart begins to grow cold, as my life begins to fold, i see my end ,something u cant pretend, i rip my heart out, nd begin to shout, i dont wanna stay alive, i may not survive i adopted a chibi! name:Kakashi likes:Ramen doesn't like:Flavorless Food owner:--iHolyness- you can adopt one too adopt me!

Posted by: --iHolyness-- Fri Jan 02, 2009 @ 08:41am

i adopted a chibi!
name:Kakashi
likes:Ramen
doesn't like:Flavorless Food
owner:--iHolyness-
you can adopt one too
adopt me!

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Mama Pups
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Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 10:33pm


	Wow Another great poem x] Your so good xD

Commented on: Sun Jan 11, 2009 @ 07:35pm


	OMG this poem makes me wonder How much do people really care about you. Because it is your emotions and deep down you need someone to be there for you. like a cry from your heart. I love you as a BEST FRIEND truly I do. Thats why im gonna say this(I WILL CRUSH WHOEVER CRUSHES U) because well you have been wit me thru the hard times,bad times,and well good times too. smile Thank you 3nodding heart heart XOXOXO BTW I know I have crushed your spirit before so I will crush myself too .

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Commented on: Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 04:59am


	I'm gonna be completely honest with you. That's not a good poem, bro.

Commented on: Tue Apr 14, 2009 @ 05:01am

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Commented on: Sun Jun 07, 2009 @ 10:28pm


	I like it, but it seems like you're trying hard on making it ryhme, and by that it's losing the whole point and emotion. Don't worry about that, write everything with meaning.

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