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My name is Michael, I am approximately 19.
Writing again
Yep, I started up on my novel again. I'm currently working on the second book, althought the first one's far from done...

Just to make the chapters I may post more clear, I'm spoiling away the rest of the first book.

Lets see...

Eric meets anna in their class with mr. Maio,.... or what ever his name was. Anna brings eric to her dorm, where he meets karen. Everyone becomes friends. Anna has to leave over the summer, before their senior year, leaving Karen and Anna bythemselves. While anna's still gone, Karen invites eric to a party, exclusivly for couples, (Coughcough, hint hint). After that, eric bring karen back to her dorm, and... BUM BUM BUM, spends the night there, at the foot of her bed silly. In the middle of the night, eric has a nitemare, and wakes up with a start, finding out that someone is "attacking" Karen. he pretty much goes ape on that guy's a**, and he disapers, Karen wakes up, with some blood on her body, with eric holding a sword in his hands.... Something dons't seem right. Anna comes back... Eric and Karen seem too awkward to talk to eachother. When anna comes back, after eric leaves her things in her dorm, karen tells her what "happened" and eric over hears, and runs, runs far away. Anna eventualy confronts eric, and says that to forget about him, karen has been dating someone dangerious... bumbumbum!. Eric goes to appologize, and finds her and her new boyfriend, not in the best of times, with some "forced" content going on. Eric once again schools his a**.(Oops, did I just say that). Karen finialy begins to trust eric again, although not compleatly. For about half the year, eric just comes by every weekend, and they chat and that kinda stuff. One day, after some kinky truth and dare, anna comes back to eric's dorm (haha, lucky b*****d) and well, they dont get past second right away. next weekend, anna's not there on time, more kinky stuff for eric! Anna walks in on them, crying, and runs again. Eric goes out to find her, and finds her pretty much... cookoo. Eric takes a small stab in the sholder, and saves anna, telling her he loves her, of coarse she didn't exactly "hear" him at that point, still being... a tad off the ball. ERic promises her he'll control himself. It's almost graduation now, and Karen takes up the responsibility to plan out some of it. Anna and eric, of coarse, decide to help. Durring graduation, several amature bands play, Eric and Karen dance a little, but soon her responsibilities drag her away. Now, eric's still being a good boy at this point, not taken but he's not swingin around with karen. Him and Anna now dance. It's the last song, and a beautiful song plays, and they keep dancing and dancing, and in the end they leave the school grounds, dancing in the middle of the streets, as a small drizzle picks up. The first drop of water seems to bring Anna into realizing that they are graduating the next day, and wont see eachother for... how ever long. She gives eric a big hug, and tells her how she wish she could stay with him (awww...) Unfortunaly, she has to go back home, to the south. Eric does admit that he has a home to go back to, although no one expects him to exactly go there... he asks her if he could join her. She says she wish she could, but can't allow it, it'd be too dangerious... (BUM BUM BUM!). Wearly, he accepcts that fact. With no other place to go to, eric is forced to live with Karen for a few weeks. In that time... their's a nagging voice in all of their heads, karen and Eric especialy, that draws them to go back to their school... at this point, eric has already left, and is off to visit Anna, just for a day. Anna finds him in a local coffee shop, and she's almost angry to see him, and he say's he'll leave it it'd make her happy, and does. Anna follows him, and he says he's going to back to their school. Anna say's even though he cant stay in the city with her, she'll follow him, and she does. They approach their town, only to find out that it has been burned, Karen already there, mourning over a dead body.

The epilogue consists of each of them finding a body of their's to mourn. Anna finds someone whom' she's been... quite horrable to the first few years of schooling there. Karen finds A stranger, whom of which looks more fear ful then she ever hoped to see in someone's eyes. Eric dosn't find anyone at first. Inthe end, eric mourns life, missing someone who's dead. He finds a small puppy, trying to nudge a dead boy back to life... and he mourns them both.


That's the first book in a nutshell. The second one consists of some stranger approaching them, and telling them how much of a shame it was that the town had to burn, and asks them if they would alert the sorrounding towns, to the east, where eric's home is, south, where anna's home is, and west, where Karen's home is, and to the north, where a small village of nomads wander. The old man who's approached them tells them that since he is weak and old, it would be much easer for them to go, and him to catch up, then for him to go along, and cauctiously, our three friends take a weeks' rest at the site, and head out towards the east.


That's the prologue. In the next three chapters or so, we get a new chracter! WHOO! Her name is Lylie, and she some how knows eric very well.... rather almost scarry if she didn't seem to hate him so much. She calls Karen and Anna whores, and eric a b*****d, and seems to inflict that the reason he dosn't want to come back home is because he had at one point killed, or gotting killed several of their clan members!

Anyways, that's enough spoilers for now. Have fun ^ ^





 
 
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