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The many thoughts of my soul
Ok so here is the stupid story i had to write for English...tell me what you think


It was a dark and stormy day in the middle of September, the thirteenth to be exact, when the twins Roger and Larry were born. There mother, Claire, however didn’t survive the delivery leaving the boys to depend on there father. He however didn’t want the kids and wanted to give them away. On December 2, 1803, just three months after they were born, the boys were adopted into different families. The father never wanted them to know who he was.
The two boys grew up and had very different lives. Larry grew up in a very wealthy neighborhood, in a very nice mansion, and had a very wealthy father. He always had the best of everything; clothes, education, and he also had no other siblings to split his inheritance with. He ended up taking over his adopted father’s business once he was of old age. The many horses and carriages became his.
While Larry grew up lavishly, Roger wasn’t as lucky. His family always tried to give him the best they could even though they barley had enough to survive on. They tried to send him to school but had to pull him out when he was only twelve to take over his father’s job since his father had fallen deathly ill. By the time he reached the age of sixteen he was one of the best Ferrier around. He was able to make enough money to support his adopted mother and father until his father finally passed away.
It was a chilly day in March when the two brothers meet. Roger was working out at Larry’s stables shoeing the horses as was his job but had no idea who Larry was. When Larry went out to pay Roger for the job he had done he wasn’t paying much attention to what he was doing until he saw Roger and stopped in his tracks. He saw that they were identical. The two men started talking and realized they had the same birthday and the story of there mother’s death was the same. It was then that they realized that they were twin brothers and that their father was still alive somewhere.
The boys decided to go out to search for their father. It took them many weeks to locate him but they eventually found him. They went to go talk to him but when he answered the door he acted like he hadn’t had children and that he had no clue who they were. They could tell that he was lying but didn’t know why so they went to the hospital to get copies of their birth certificates as proof. They went back to their father’s house to show him and he admitted that he had lied to them and that they were his sons.
The boys and their father start to talk but Roger had to get back to work so the father invited them to dinner the next night. The boys are so mad with their father that they decide to poison him. At dinner they poison his drink before they sit down to eat, but what they don’t know is that their father also poisoned their drinks for he never wanted them to know who he was in the first place. They start talking and eating and are having an enjoyable time when they all start getting delusional and pass out. They boys and there father burn in the house as a small ember escapes from the burning fireplace and falls to the carpet. All is quiet as the fire rages and dies become dark and still.






Kiss of a Dead Rose
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    haruanta
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    commentCommented on: Mon Dec 01, 2008 @ 08:47am
    it came out nicely i liked the ending it remonds me of a few of poes poems ^^


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