Just one Record today. It's late and I'm tired. Besides, this thing took forever to rate considering it's size.
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Queen of the Vampires: Thalia's Reign
Article Name - I'm glad you gave the RP a second header 'Thalia's Reign', giving it that extra boost it need to grab an RPer's interest. Having just 'Queen of the Vampires' would be to unoriginal and common.
First Glimpse - Well, the first glimpse took a while considering its length. Your RP showed promise when some of your beginning RPers did not.
Organization - You need to fix a few things here. It was hard for me to understand a few things though, thanks to variating text colors, I was able to interpret more for less of the hassel.
Details
a) Rules - Rules are sometimes better in a list form, but I did like how you described and stressed the killing rule. It's good to be specific.
b) Storyline - Not so great, but then again, it does say, 'Under Construction', so I'm in no place to judge.
c) Profile Management - No profile management... but you know what? I like it better that way.
Looking Deep - When I looked deep into the RP. I noticed a lot of vanishing RPers, your face rare in itself on the RP. Literacy is an issue with many of them, but others seem to have the right idea. You've started something really nice.
Literacy - It's a tough balance, but you yourself seem to have it down quite nicely. Just a few minor errors everybody makes, like some I'm probably making right now.
Effort - It looks like to me that you put a lot of mental effort into this, but slacked off a bit, but it doesn't really matter considering the vast number of RPers you've collected.
Dedication - You don't seem much dedicated to the RP from what I can see, but then again, you could be looking over above, monitoring the others as they go. This is a tough one to judge.
Popularity Points - Looking at all the various Gaian's I've seen in the RP of either who quit or stayed, I'd say you've got yourself a pretty popular RP.
Post Count - Huge, what can I say? It's a gem among the copper pieces.
Overall Grade - 4
Overall Comment - A lot of strengths and a lot of weaknesses, but because of such a high post count and popularity, it outweights most of which is bad. Congradulations.
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RPer Awards - Genity Von Maniquince [For use of good literacy and outstanding dedication to a long term RP]
Queen of the Vampires: Thalia's Reign
Article Name - I'm glad you gave the RP a second header 'Thalia's Reign', giving it that extra boost it need to grab an RPer's interest. Having just 'Queen of the Vampires' would be to unoriginal and common.
First Glimpse - Well, the first glimpse took a while considering its length. Your RP showed promise when some of your beginning RPers did not.
Organization - You need to fix a few things here. It was hard for me to understand a few things though, thanks to variating text colors, I was able to interpret more for less of the hassel.
Details
a) Rules - Rules are sometimes better in a list form, but I did like how you described and stressed the killing rule. It's good to be specific.
b) Storyline - Not so great, but then again, it does say, 'Under Construction', so I'm in no place to judge.
c) Profile Management - No profile management... but you know what? I like it better that way.
Looking Deep - When I looked deep into the RP. I noticed a lot of vanishing RPers, your face rare in itself on the RP. Literacy is an issue with many of them, but others seem to have the right idea. You've started something really nice.
Literacy - It's a tough balance, but you yourself seem to have it down quite nicely. Just a few minor errors everybody makes, like some I'm probably making right now.
Effort - It looks like to me that you put a lot of mental effort into this, but slacked off a bit, but it doesn't really matter considering the vast number of RPers you've collected.
Dedication - You don't seem much dedicated to the RP from what I can see, but then again, you could be looking over above, monitoring the others as they go. This is a tough one to judge.
Popularity Points - Looking at all the various Gaian's I've seen in the RP of either who quit or stayed, I'd say you've got yourself a pretty popular RP.
Post Count - Huge, what can I say? It's a gem among the copper pieces.
Overall Grade - 4
Overall Comment - A lot of strengths and a lot of weaknesses, but because of such a high post count and popularity, it outweights most of which is bad. Congradulations.
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RPer Awards - Genity Von Maniquince [For use of good literacy and outstanding dedication to a long term RP]
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