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My writings and poems
I don't think i'm a good writer. I don't even think I'm good at anything, and if you want to waste your time reading these so called 'poems' go right ahead. I'm just sorry they're not as great as I would like them to be.
to my angel.
Am I the one whom you blame?
Am I the one that’s put to shame
All I wanted is for you to smile
And I wanted to kiss you a while

I’m so stupid for treating you right
I’m an a*****e for believing your lies
It was love that shot me down
It was you who kicked me around

When I hear you I begin to cry
When I see you I slowly die
I’m so hurt now because of you
Now I don’t know what else to do

What did I do to make it so wrong
Was it me or all of those songs
That I wrote in the honor of us
Does it have to lead to all this fuss

When I’m alone I hurt myself
I don’t care about my status or health
How could you break me so horribly
I just wanted to see you happy

And it pains me to write you this
Letter but I have to admit
That you’re amazing, and the best
Excuse the blood surrounding my chest






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discowolf123
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 14, 2009 @ 12:11am
Dude that is one kick a** poem you should right more. Really you should.


commentCommented on: Mon May 30, 2011 @ 03:28am
This is one strong emotional poem, you should get these published as like a story through poems.



notlevi
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