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Poems of Life: Whispers the Silence In the silent a man screams out in pain, "Oh when will it stop! When will justice come!" Yells the troubled heart. A reply comes to him in the form of the silence, "Justice will come, just wait and it will rain down on the people." Whispers the silence. It surrounds the man in a cloak of sucurity and comfort. The Silence whispers again to the man. "I am always with you; in the good times and the bad times. When your scared I will comfort you and when you are lonly I will walk with you. Just be in the silence and I am there."

Posted by: Crown_Clown926 Wed Jul 02, 2008 @ 02:22am

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thestolenpromise
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Commented on: Wed Jul 02, 2008 @ 02:59am


	I really, really like it. I love how you make the silence 'speak'. It really makes you think... I really like it. 3nodding

Commented on: Wed Jul 02, 2008 @ 08:58pm


	interesting crown, I like things beings quiet it calms me but i'll take fun over that anyday. nice poem try something nice in the next one. xd smile

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Nibi-san
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Commented on: Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 01:37am


	wow! That was the most amazing poem I ever read. nipah. 4laugh

Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 02:24am


	the topics for your poems are amazing, and you write about them and for them soo well ... people say, how can we even begin to understand. i think you have well and truely started. they all open my mind to new ways of looking at and into things... for that i am eternally greatful . xx

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