okay heres a poem i wrote and i want you guyzes opinions on it so COMMENTS! okay. here goes
untitled(for now)
they are the very things they talk about
they fail to see what lies before their own eyes
they fail to realize that nothing else matters
all they have to do is look outside their own world
their hidden fake smiles, stabbing hushed exclaimations
preps, outcasts, goths, punks, you name it
all neatly labled, stcked away gathering dust
and this comeing from the mouths of attention seeking hypocrites
lacking in their own descitions
following those of others
in order to become "popular"
impacting us in their quest
afraid to say anything to our faces
huddled by their lockers
insults spewing back and forth
and we cant help but laugh
and watch helplesslt at their humanity
as they lap up attention like dogs
remarkes showering down on us like rain
and yet, we never listen
only gaining the knowledge of useless remarks we never use
preparing our selves for the real world.
okay that was it. well i gtg check my pms. laterz. luv ya much
jaycee
 used_and_abused182 · Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 03:35am · 4 Comments |
