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HellSander & Selene
Hey guys! Well this is my Gaia Journal and let's hope you like my stories. I'll be putting one or two chapters per week and if you're lucky I might put a little more... just read them. 367 Views and 76 comments!!! You guys are awesome!!!
HellSander IX
HellSander:

We were passing through some clouds trying to get home, I looked back and I could see Heaven gates closing. I was happy that I got my sister and one wing but I needed to train my powers. When I could see the city something small was flying toward us. I couldn't see pretty well because of all the clouds but Selene started screaming, I knew she was scared so I had to do something about it. I grab my sword and Selene told me she was going to hide so she jumped to the city. That little thing I saw awhile ago was getting closer and closer, suddenly I knew it was a demon. Our swords clashed and fire came out of them, I tried to cut him but he did a back-flip and punched me in the face. He threw me out of the sky and while I was falling I looked down and I wasn't falling into the city but Hell! I looked up and the demon stabbed me, such pain that I started screaming, both of us fall into a volcano. He fell into the fire but I was hanging from a rock, I felt asleep and when I was going to fall on the fire someone came to my rescue.

When I woke up I was in a huge bed, when I looked at my right I saw someone, I kept looking at him and I realized this was... the devil.

Devil: What's the matter son?
Zenova: *scared* don't call me that!
Devil: Then what should I call you?
Zenova: *sits on bed* Zenova?
Devil: Zenova? Hmm. Nah, I should call you... Zoneva.
Zenova: But that's my demon name.
Devil: That's correct, my son.
Zenova: eek
Devil: Would you be so kind and let me talk to him?
Zenova: No.
Devil: Have I ever told you...
Zenova: don't care
Devil: Getting mad...
Zenova: good
Devil: *get's extremely mad* *put's Zenova arms on fire*
Zenova: O my God! What have you done?!
Devil: *laughing*
Zenova: *can't stand the pain and tears are coming down from his eyes*

*Suddenly times stops and he can see Zoneva*

Zoneva: You weakling! You have fire powers and you are getting burned?!
Zenova: Tell me. What should I do?
Zoneva: There is a technique that you can use...
Zenova: Teach me!
Zoneva: When I enter your body I want you to scream "Rafigu", is a special power that uses fire, the fire is surrounding your arms and your punches and sword are stronger. Just be careful.
Zenova: I promise you, I'll tear him apart!

*Times starts again and Zenova's arms are on fire*

Zenova: Rafigu!!! *The fire stops burning and surround his arms*
Devil: My son is smart. *smiles* But not smart enough!
Zenova: Ocularis! *He's eyes turn dark red while the fire in his arm turns blue*
Devil: Impossible!
Zenova: *grabs the devil by his neck* Where are my parents?! *mad*
Devil: *smiles*
Zenova: Tell me before I...
Devil:What? Before you, what?
Zenova: *punches him in the face*
Devil: real heroic... *touches Zenova's stomach*
Zenova: *starts bleeding and falls to the ground while all the fire in his arms vanishes and the eyes turn back to normal* Why?
Devil: I'll tell you were your parents are, not here, you have to go outside of this castle and look for them.
Zenova: *suffering* Why are they here?
Devil: Don't tell me you don't remember. You trade them for power when you were a little kid and it was time to claim my price.
Zenova: Is there a chance that we might trade back? before i die...
Devil: Of course! What do you have to offer?
Zenova: the powers you gave me.
Devil: *sits in chair* Actually, the only thing I want is yout sister soul. *smiles*
Zenova: You!
Devil: No? then bye. *teleports him in the sky where he fought with the demon*

*Falling from the sky*

Zenova: Sorry sis, but this is my last... *faints while bleeding*

*Falling off the sky people could see him and everyone was worried, Zenova... hit the ground*

To be Continued...


Credits:
Jose A. Lora






User Comments: [4] [add]
Darkness Unstuck
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 01, 2008 @ 06:52pm
Awesome!


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 04:12am
i spend days trying to come up with names for my story and u just mix them?


Jess...



sesJ...


wtf? rofl



aaaanyways rolleyes .... ur doing great 3nodding



Madly Black
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Reiyuki-Mai-In The Night
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 05:38am
Well yea the name of Zenova's demon is going to change later but he has that name because Zenova is lazy and he gave him that one.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 10:22am
great!! u guyz have an amazing imgination!! ^.^



x-Deathz_Passiion-x
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