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HellSander & Selene
Hey guys! Well this is my Gaia Journal and let's hope you like my stories. I'll be putting one or two chapters per week and if you're lucky I might put a little more... just read them. 367 Views and 76 comments!!! You guys are awesome!!!
HellSander VII (Updated 5/18/08)
HellSander:

I walk in this beautiful place, I can see little kids with two wings, others with four wings. I keep walking towards the fountain, I can see Kentachi with two Arcangels and in the middle was God, our God. I can hear Kentachi saying that he did what he was told, God looked at him with such peace in his eyes. God knew I was looking and he teleported me in Kentachi's side, he was surprised and both Arcangels grab my arms and made me kneel. Kentachi was surprised that I made it this far but he knew I wanted something. Kentachi asked God to be ascended but he didn't agree because he knew Kentachi could follow the wrong path with more power. For the first time Zenova looked at God in the eyes, face to face, and he asked for his family. God got sad all of a sudden, "What's the matter?" I asked. They are at Hell.
Zenova: All of them? *crying*
God: My son, I wish I could tell you more but I can't.
Zenova: Wait! What about my sister?! Is she here?
God: Selene?
Zenova: Where is she?!
God: You'll see her soon enough, I promise. For your bravery on reaching Heaven still alive i'll give you two presents. Just sleep and when you wake up you will see them.
Suddenly I fainted, when i woke up I had a beautiful wing in the left side of my back. When I looked up *still on the floor* I could see Selene looking me in the eyes and smiling.

To be Continued...

Credits:
Jose A. Lora

Chloe Sugino






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Galuka
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 10:53pm
Nice work... no i'm wondering 1 wing?
and why is his family in hell? (selene isn't obviously (whoo jump to conlcusions))


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:23pm
Well we can say that i put in chapter II that he sacrifice his family for more power, he gave their souls to the devil for his own desires and Zenova feels bad about it...



Reiyuki-Mai-In The Night
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:39pm
oh haha so selene must be in hell also... cuz he sacrificed them all and stuff... dam there's a twist


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:41pm
Yea i know and HellSander VIII explains what happened with Selene...



Reiyuki-Mai-In The Night
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Galuka
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:42pm
wait there's angels and god... that must mean he's in heaven or it could be a dream or an illusion... but then again he did get a wing


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:43pm
dam look at me babble on... well i missed that... must have clicked on somethin weird @_@ cunfused... i'll brb



Galuka
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Reiyuki-Mai-In The Night
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 30, 2008 @ 11:43pm
Well just wait one more week and read Selene I if you want to see her side of the story...


commentCommented on: Thu May 01, 2008 @ 06:58pm
Awww.. This one is so sweet.. He got to see his sister.
So you mean to tell me most of his family is in hell cause he put them there? How sad. crying
I love your story. Keep it up!User Image



Beth Vale
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commentCommented on: Sat May 03, 2008 @ 02:00am
*jumping around* i wanna know more! blaugh


commentCommented on: Sun May 04, 2008 @ 03:03am
*I grab Naiyuki by the hand and hugz here* Calm down, just one more week...



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