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It's the little things in life...
I post all sorts of things here, like lyrics, thoughts, little things i don't feel like putting anywhere else...
My Fable
I feel like slowly fallin like a stone
tip me over from the top of the wall
Let his majesty come to my side
but I know progress will be at a crawl

pick me up among the broken pieces
pull out your horn and sound the call
take off your crown and fall to your knees
just help me get up from my fall

The sun is goin down
and I'm runnin out of time
the king is off his horse
and holding his crown
as his men come running
and you can hear the cat with his fiddle
as the children walk the path
all the way to a tasty house
and the witch is speakin a riddle
as the sun goes down

the king is next to me cryin'
it seems I'm caught in a royal flush
The pieces of my life don't seem to fit
but they are doin' what they can after my crush

I can see the kids as they tumble
they started at the top of the hill
as they reach the king, they land on his crown
it seems reality can really end the thrill

The sun is goin down
and I'm runnin out of time
the king is off his horse
and holding his crown
as his men come running
and you can hear the cat with his fiddle
as the children walk the path
all the way to a tasty house
and the witch is speakin a riddle
as the sun goes down

Looks like I'll never be whole
No matter how hard they all try
can't put me back together
and won't till cows can fly

as the children walk the path
all the way to a tasty house
and the witch is speakin a riddle
as the sun goes down

Juge Varius
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  • User Comments: [6]
    Feybraiha
    Community Member





    Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 03:07am


    I like it when people try to convey a more serious side of nursery rhymes, but I've never actually seen the focus on Humpdy Dumpdy. I like.


    Juge Varius
    Community Member





    Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 03:10am


    I always liked those too. Never heard one for HD either, and I always thought that the story was kinda sad, so i wanted to convey his feelings.


    Mari-Mari33
    Community Member





    Tue May 13, 2008 @ 09:52am


    Your depth always amazes me .


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    Mari-Mari
    Sleeping En
    Community Member





    Tue May 20, 2008 @ 04:34am


    Hey! Read this one already! I just didn't manage to comment on it before.


    Hum, still a comment whore razz


    X_Pro Tagonist_X
    Community Member





    Thu May 22, 2008 @ 12:48pm


    >_< you use and far to much in the course... I like it though. It's fun. ahh, maybe, it should be The tasty house instead of A tasty house. there was only one in then tale, yeah?


    Myrielle
    Community Member





    Fri May 23, 2008 @ 12:49am


    I do love the imagery. I have a thing for the medieval. I did notice that you do favor the use children and the setting sun as metaphors in your works. Do not mean to interpret but it does give a sense of the twilight of childhood prior to the coming of age message hidden in your verses. I don't think it's that tragic...more like something inevitable but yet there is need to come to terms with life's cold facts.


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