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this is just s**t that pops into my head (A phrase or pic or anything) i will sit down and write it down in the form of poetry Please replay or PM me i love to here what people have to say about this isnt the final verson they still need some work

Anons
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 @ 12:45am

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Commented on: Sun Jul 03, 2005 @ 06:15am


	Hrm, you rather like writting poems on death. I really like all of your poems, but writting on one topic, after awhile, gets boring. Death, in poetry, is an over rated topic. Chances are that what you write has already been written before. I suggest that you add in your poetry other topics, and not just death. It's better to write on many different subjects, and get inspiration, than it is to stay on one subject and get frustrated because you can't think of anything else to say.

Commented on: Sun Jul 10, 2005 @ 12:24am


	i really like this poem it is intersting

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Victorian Bride
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Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 11:43am


	As much as I like the idea for this, I find it monotone and expressionless. I am afraid I find this branch of poetry inferior to one which sustains rhythm, movements, possibly rhyme and is less self-explanitory.

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