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A STORY!! Invader Vea and Invader Jez Part one
Jez: Are we there yet?
shrugs shoulders back and stares at the cealing
Greg: NO! FOR THE LAST TIME SHUT UP!
screams at the top of his lungs while piloting voot
Fang: Is our new partner gonna meet us there?

Vea: No clue... COFFEE!!!!
jumps up as she says coffee
Jez: Are you ok?
staring at Vea while poking her
Greg: No. She hasn't had any coffee sence she got in the voot.
looks bored

--Massive comes into view--

Vea slams into the window of the voot
Vea: COFFEE!! They're bound to have coffee!
eye twitches, looks delireous
Greg: We won't be able to get any coffee for you until after we talk to the Tallest. Which will be in a couple minutes.

--See the outside of voot as it pulls up to Massive--

Vea: Ahhhaghrahhh!!!! NEED COFFEE NOW!!
twitches violently, foams at the mouth, blacks out
Greg: Ok... I'll carry her.
picks up Vea and carries her inside the Massive
Jez: Usually I'd expect that from you or me.
looks at Fang
Fang: I know... And I wanted to do it too.
looks extreamly dissapointed

--Inside Zim's voot--

Zim: Did you remember everything Gir?
Gir: Yes Sir!
salutes, camando Gir
Zim: Well I guess it be too late to turn back now, six months too late. After all we have a set time to meet with the Tallest...
and our partners, yeck. I don't need any help. I mean I am the best invader there is.

--Massive comes into view (again)--

Zim: You ready Gir?
Gir: I don't know.

--Voot docks with massive--

Zim: Well, come on Gir.

--In the Command Room (Controll Room)--

Purple: What's wrong with Vea?
points at Vea
Greg: You do not want to know.
really big eyes
Vea wakes up
Vea: WHAT I MISS!
jumps up and lands on Greg
Red: I see she's awake...
raises eyebrows
Vea jumps onto Red, clingie
Vea: Do you have coffee?
raises pitch at you, then slides down Red slowly.
Zim walks in
Zim: MY TALLEST! I have gathered much information the filthy humans!
sees Vea hanging onto Red
Hey, woa. Did I walk in on something?
points at Red and Vea
Purple: Awww.. It's soooo cute... Can we keep it?
does cute puppy eyes
Red: No! She and Jez Might be our future..... Oh hi Zim... Holy s**t you got tall!!!
picks Vea off of him and holds her like a new pet, she just twitches every now and then.
Purple: Holy s**t he did get tall!!!
he stares and points at Zim with one had and absentmidedly pets Vea, she's finaly calm, starts changing into
irken uniform
Greg: Are you calm now?
looks up at Vea
Vea: Yea... I think so... What happened?
tilts her head to one side.
Greg: Please tell me you didn't forget about the mission we just came from.
Vea: No... maybe... Yes...
Greg stares at her
Vea: Just a little!
uses her fingers, going from an inch apart to using both hands a foot apart
It gets quiet all of a sudden and everybody's staring at eachother, then they hear music over the message screan
Fang's dancing to Roses are Red and Violets are Blue Techno Remix. Jez starts dancing and in a couple of seconds Gir starts
dancing too, then Purple grabs Vea away from Red and starts dancing, she hangs limply.

Zim: ... Ok, this is kindof awkward.
Greg: Tell me about it.
looks at Zim
Red: THAT'S ENOUGH!!! We have things to do, and doughnuts to eat.
Jez cuts the music looking sad and scared
Purple: Aww, well you're right. Ok Zim, Jez, Vea; you have new partners. Well not really new, you three are going
to be working together to take Earth. Also... GIR GET OFF THE DOUGHNUTS!!!

Zim curls his hands into fists and is steemed. Jez and Fang hold hands and start jumping and twirling singing Sexy
Vampire. Vea and Greg shake their heads but Vea starts singing along.


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Apocalyptic Ken
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 01:36am
Who are playing the charectors.
And plus i got lost which ones are the robots???


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 02:02am
Jez= Irken girl

Vea= Irken girl

Fang= Girl robot

Greg= boy robot. =3



MusicMango
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Apocalyptic Ken
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 02:37am
Ok ima gonna go start my pac-man comic.Im superb at makeing them cause i kinda made a beta comic.I need help on thinking for some ideas.HELP PLEASE.


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 03:13am
i can't believe you people.



Blind Guitarist
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ZuriaRuleAleron
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 23, 2010 @ 12:54am
O dear lord... We haven't worked on this thing in forever... think we should finish it?


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