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///.-)y
miss you
i'm missing you
wherever you may be
i wish you knew
so you can see

that i want you here
right back with me
without a fear
'cause ur a key

to my heart
but now it's too late
we're tearing apart
i just can't wait

all i hope for
is one more word
just to make sure
that i'm still heard

i almost cry
but i guess now, it's goodbye






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fullmetal_dylan
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 11, 2007 @ 04:01pm
Aww
that is good^^


I will still always love you
I AM SPARTACUS!
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 12, 2007 @ 10:20am
I like it but you could tweak it abit, to make this poem perfect.
Fri Dec 07, 2007 @ 06:31pm
(the one i'm commenting.)



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Dark Fire Samurai
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 19, 2007 @ 05:49am
wow u good at writing poems no doubt about it!


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 29, 2007 @ 07:45pm
Aw i love that poem! oops, by the way this is max! bwahaha! lol



Zerrissen
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Zerrissen
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 07:40pm
Max, you d**k! lol


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 13, 2008 @ 11:56pm
i like it 3nodding



joker _x5
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