3nodding As the evil lord sat in his throne, there was a small pitter pattering sound coming from across the great hall. His eyes were about to shut when suddenly, the soldiers barged into the hall. "What's going on?" yelled the evil king?
"Sir there has been a brack-in in the castle. The whole kingdom is currently is on red-alert. Please be careful my lord."
The soldiers then ran through the the doors. The king was stunned about this news. He started passing around the throne, thinking about what to do. Then, quiety, a little bunny creature jumped and pulled out a sword. The king saw this and he was paralyzed in fear...and definitely shocked at the the fact that a little bunny thing was attacking him. He grabbed a spear from behind and blocked the attack. It was a powerful blow. "Puuuuuuu!" yelled the cute bunny.
"Wha, what are you?"
"I am...MOKONA!!!!!"
The lord stammered, but then he whimpered out these words, "why...why are you here?"
"I am here because, you have my, bunny slippers!!!!"
"...Wha?"
"Die evil slipper stealer!"
Mokona lunged for the lord, swinging her sword. The lord covered himself for protection, but even that couldn't do anything. He had been hit. (good thing it was a plastic sword mrgreen ) With that, Mokona took the slippers and began to walk away. But that wasn't the end. The soldiers barged in, weapons drawn. Mokona looked at them, with no expression. Then, with a great, very loud PUUUUUU, she unleashed the one, the only... "NCHA CANNON!"
A great beam shot out of the gem on her head, blasting through the pillars everywhere in the hall. The soldiers screamed as the were hit. After all this destruction happened, Mokona walked away into the night, carrying her slippers.
I know this is crazy (cause I'm crazy, so's addrianna818 hehehe) but nothing bad please 3nodding
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The Great Mokona Assasin
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(OHH BTW, WITH ALL THOSE SPELLING ERRORS, CODY WOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOU)
"Sir there has been a brack-in in the castle. The whole kingdom is currently is on red-alert. Please be careful my lord."
The soldiers then ran through the the doors. The king was stunned about this news. He started passing around the throne, thinking about what to do. Then, quiety, a little bunny creature jumped and pulled out a sword. The king saw this and he was paralyzed in fear...and definitely shocked at the the fact that a little bunny thing was attacking him. He grabbed a spear from behind and blocked the attack. It was a powerful blow. "Puuuuuuu!" yelled the cute bunny.
"Wha, what are you?"
"I am...MOKONA!!!!!"
The lord stammered, but then he whimpered out these words, "why (CAPS AT THE START OF SENTENCE)...why are you here?"
"I am here because, you have my, bunny slippers UM IRREGULAR USE OF COMMAS!!!!"
"...Wha?"
"Die evil slipper stealer!"
Mokona lunged for the lord, swinging her sword. The lord covered himself for protection, but even that couldn't do anything. He had been hit. (good thing it was a plastic sword icon_mrgreen.gif ) With that, Mokona took the slippers and began to walk away. But that wasn't the end. The soldiers barged in, weapons drawn. Mokona looked at them, with no expression. Then, with a great, very loud PUUUUUU, she unleashed the one, the only... "NCHA CANNON!"
A great beam shot out of the gem on her head, blasting through the pillars everywhere in the hall. The soldiers screamed as the were hit. After all this destruction happened, Mokona walked away into the night, carrying her slippers.
AND NO OFFENSE BUT BAD SENTENCE STRUCTURE TOO. BUT THATS OKAY AS LONG AS YOU DON'T WRITE LIKE THAT IN SCHOOL. AND IF YOU DO... OH WELL WE STILL LOVE YOU. BUT YEAH NICE STORY =)