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	My FanFics The story behind Asami the innocent reliever
	My FanFics The story behind Asami the innocent reliever


~~Part One~~ *=thoughts ""=talking Asami stared out the black tinted window. It was Only green trees for miles now and was in the middle of no where.She brushed the skin of her pet kitten that slept soundly on her lap.The Cab began to slow down."We have arrived Madam." Asami Gave a nod and began to gather her things. The cab came to an complete halt and Asami opened the door. It was a Bright spring day and she was stuck in a stuffy for cab for about 7 hours. Asami Began to stretch her legs as the cab driver grabbed her duffle bag from the trunk.So its finally come down to this.Asami closed her eyes and gave a sigh. -Flash Back- "75 murders, no evidence left behind,and the face of an angel. How do you do it?" Asami watched as a man in a black suit pase infront of her. " Im surprised we've caught you so easily." Asami glared and crossed her legs"You were just luckly that i slipped this time.""o really now?" "yes, and your also lucky that i'm chained to that chair." Asami tugged at the chains"dont you think thats a lil over kill?" The man chuckled,"For a women who is a mass murder? we dont wanna take any chances." The man Pulled up a chair and set it in Front of her and sat down."I have an Proposion For you." Asami rolled her eyes"I dont do deals." "well i think you may find this one rather intriguing"Intriging my a "We are offering to not give you the death penulty my dear only if you surve in our army for 30 years." Asamis eyes widen"WHAT?!" The Man stood up."You powers to kill are way above our men. We could use a women like you Defending our country" "i refuse" " Well you really dont have a choice.""So what was the point in asking me?!" The man smirked and walked to the door."I just wanted you to feel special." -Flash Back Ends- " Here you go miss" Asami shook her head and took the duffle bag from the cab driver.With a nod the cab driver walked To the drivers seat and began to back out " you have a nice day miss". Asami put Her kitten on her head as he woke up and looked around."Its alright Miharo Dont worry we'll get out of here soon"But miharo began to panic and jumped off of head and ran inside the camp! "Miharo Wait!!!" Asami chased after miharo. And occasionally bumping in to people. She stared at the ground to make sure no one stepped on her and followed were miharo went. Suddenly a hand picked up miharo.Asami looked up but she went crashing into the person.Asami fell beckwards and landed hard on her bottom. "ugh.....im so sorry" Asami Said as she rubbed her head. -sigh-"Recklessness will not be tolerated here miss". Asami looked up to see a man in suspenders and black pants. He wore an General Hat and had on monocle on his right eye. Miharo jumped out of his hand and landed on asami's head."Well Im sorry that she was so small that i had to chase her while looking down so that i may not get trampled on." The man rolled his eyes and stuck out a hand" I understand that it may have been and accident but please dont let it happen again." Asami sighed and took his hand and began to stand up. The man brushed her off slowly"So whats your name soldier?""People call me asami." The man bent down and picked up her duffel bag "Im General Iudex,I help run things around here." NEED GAIA FAMILY crying PM ME IF YOU WANT TO JOIN! total members:5 AsamiTheInnocentReliever** · Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 01:29am · 3 Comments


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	Awesomeness. General Iudex at your service bows xp A bit of advice when you're going to do a lot of quotations because people are speaking. When the character is talking you should make a new line and indent and after the quote is over, at the end indicate who said it. Because when all the speaking is bunched up like that in one paragraph, it gets confusing on who's talking. I mean it's ok to put like, one or two quotes when people talk in a paragraph, but nothing more. 3nodding Good so far. Just be careful of your spelling, I found a few typos here and there. Offline General Iudex · Community Member · Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 12:33am


	okies ill try to do that. thank you mr.glasses man. Offline AsamiTheInnocentReliever · Community Member · Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 02:26pm


	Interesting Offline Kuma the wolf alchemist · Community Member · Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 04:24am

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