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Wish upon a star and blow out the flower petals. Watch as they flutter way...
Eternity
Give me your hand, lend me your faith
the clock chimes in tune with the
bittersweet melody I've created
Wake me up, call my name
let me know, this isn't a game,
I don't know, life's not the same,
so wake me up, call my name.
I can feel them all around me
almost as if they're haunting me,
tell me I'm going crazy,
Wake me up, call my name,
'cause I know deep inside,
this isn't just a game,
maybe life has been the same,
and that I'm just going insane,
can you still call my name?
Keep on holding, don't let go,
I can't see, I can't feel anything,
I believe, I believe in nothing,
Let me sleep, don't let me wake,
let the spirits, my soul take,
our inner demons, we do create.


Author's Note
Hmm...this is not one of my favorite poems, but it's my first rhyme...hahhaa...anyways, the meaning? You tell me. (hint: not a emo love song)

Lunirae
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  • User Comments: [1]
    InuSweetheart
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    Fri Sep 28, 2007 @ 12:47am


    T-This is one of the *awe* most beautiful mysterious poems I've ever read!
    You're doing a great job!!!
    They are beautiful.


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