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My Love. This feeling inside, it hurts me here. It hurts my heart, its broken i fear. When i stare into your ocean of blue, I cant help but think, i know nothing of you. Your lovely chocolate hair, your thin pink lips, Are things surely i, dont wanna miss. I wan to hold you, close to my heart. But im afraid we'll soon be apart. My love for you shines brighter then the sun, But this feeling inside, makes my heart go numb. Please! Dont leave me! i will be forever lost. But, I knew i would pay this unheavenly cost. Goodbye my love, for whom i once knew. But, Today again, i start a new.

Posted by: Miwako BlueSummers Thu Apr 28, 2005 @ 12:56am

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Micah Regal
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Commented on: Thu Apr 28, 2005 @ 01:05am


	Wow... I Like your use of metaphors, I Tend to use that too in my music. Good job!

Commented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 06:46am


	wow....i never new that you loved me dude.....lolololololololololol.................just kidden or am i? wink see you later b***h............

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Miwako BlueSummers
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Commented on: Sat May 21, 2005 @ 07:52pm


	Tara...you know i dont love ya like that. Heck...your pretty Hard to love...lol xd Anyway...Cya at school on Monday! sweatdrop ((p.s. Your post kinda scares meh... sweatdrop ))

Commented on: Tue Jan 03, 2006 @ 08:47pm


	...Homigawds! Lovley! Very...depressing...why do all poems have to be depressing?

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